if you want your writing to be completely torn apart cmere

Kyllorac wrote:Hello there! I don't believe I've ever gotten a review from you, so let's change that.

Keep Driving

I'd be particularly interested in your impressions of the overall tone of the piece, as well as your interpretation of what is actually going on in the story.

done

i need help with my tenses n my pace. pick whichever u like

Beginning (part1)
Family and Friends (part2)
Fluffs (part3)

please review this Seltas's first kill I'd rather brutally honest then well not.

Kyllorac wrote:Hello there! I don't believe I've ever gotten a review from you, so let's change that.

Keep Driving

I'd be particularly interested in your impressions of the overall tone of the piece, as well as your interpretation of what is actually going on in the story.

done

You could review my "Danser" series.

"Danser" Pt. 1

Please review my piece Butterflies Out of the Wings at Ballerinas Out of the Wings
Many thanks

Please review my piece Butterflies Out of the Wings at Ballerinas Out of the Wings
Many thanks

Eyyy can you review my prison escape introduction and chapter 1 please? Be very harsh I want to improve!
The Running Man Introduction and Chapter 1

MasterAvi wrote:Eyyy can you review my prison escape introduction and chapter 1 please? Be very harsh I want to improve!
The Running Man Introduction and Chapter 1

done

camusic wrote:please review this Seltas's first kill I'd rather brutally honest then well not.

forgot to mark this as done

reviving this thread, i got new stuff to post which means i gotta do some reviews qq

So I'm kinda scared to ask for a review from you, but here goes anyway. I' writing a novel called Code: Delete, which seems to fall under realistic teen fiction with dystopian elements. It's set in the future. I have two chapters below that I want some feedback on:

Chapter 12: Footprint

Chapter 14: Coffee


You don't have to do both; if you could do even one I would really appreciate it.

- Mira

Miraculor77 wrote:So I'm kinda scared to ask for a review from you, but here goes anyway. I' writing a novel called Code: Delete, which seems to fall under realistic teen fiction with dystopian elements. It's set in the future. I have two chapters below that I want some feedback on:

Chapter 12: Footprint

Chapter 14: Coffee


You don't have to do both; if you could do even one I would really appreciate it.

- Mira

did 12.

almost forgot this thread existed lol

Hello again! I would really appreciate it if you could review my essay draft. I did it for school and am in desperate need of feedback, so feel free to get as nitpicky as you want.

Comparison between Fahrenheit 451's Society and Ours - an essay

I will except your challenge! Could you review Entry one/?: Little Miss Horror Show for me? It would be much appreciated so i can move onto how to fix the next chapter!

LP out