Hey, Vil! Just saw this and thought to give it a review. I don't know much about RBG and I'm just learned about him a few seconds ago, but I would like to give you a few suggestions before we go off to the next chapter of our lives.
I feel like you should add a few stanzas for this poem. I usually don't like to talk about those things, but I would just love it if you explained more about him! It is quite a beautiful poem and I thought maybe you could add off a bit more just for the flavor of reading this wonderful piece of poem. And of explaining more about RBG for those who don't know him or haven't even hear of him, as I.
I just love how you write this, it is well written and no one could deny the respect inside this poem. And the title simple but a way to start a poem! With a few words title of so much meaning to those who know and respect RBG! It is truly a poem I wish I could write about my favorite poets and authors.
Thought it is well written, we all have suggestions, alright? So don't you feel bad about the days you get a critique including Chris' amazing review! Never mind, just joking.
You protected our rights,
preserved them,
held them with honor.
Frontiero v. Richardson
came first, but was not the last.
You don't necessarily need a comma after "first". It might be better without it since it doesn't have any specific rhyme and it doesn't have anything to do with the beat of a song or so.
Yup, that's all for today.
Have a splendid day!
Happy RevMo!
Keep up the beautiful writings!
Yours,
Chris
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