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Hey there! Welcome to my WRFF thread!

First off, before we start, let me explain how I review!
-I read as I review. This way you're getting my pure, unfiltered thoughts as I read. Sometimes, that means that something I commented or critiqued on is actually answered later on in the text. I may say as much in my review, but everything in my review is there for a reason, so it's still something to keep in mind.
-I place emphasis on the introduction. I love good intros, and I believe that a great intro can help a weak story, and a weak intro can severely damage an amazing story. So, expect a paragraph or two on your first paragraph or two
-I quote a lot. Sometimes it's just to tell you that you have a typo (not often) or it's to give specific examples to what I'm talking about.
-I tend to ramble. That's just how I do! I've tried to change it, but my reviews are very much unfiltered reactions and critiques to what I'm reading.
-I will have overall thoughts. This will be at the end of the review and it'll be an overview of some of my points in the review and a general feel of the story.
-I want to have a conversation! Most importantly, I feel, is my want to have my review be the beginning of a conversation, not the end. Reply to my review, PM me, invite me to a WFP. Let's talk about your story!It'll be a fun time.

Things I WILL Review

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Short Stories
Novels - If you ask me to review a certain part of a novel, expect me to start at the beginning. So, just send me a link to the beginning. Also, expect it to take awhile.
Action/Adventure
General Fiction
Historical Fiction
Horror
Supernatural
Fantasy
Mythology
Science-Fiction

Things I MAY Review

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Fanfiction - I won't review fanfiction I don't know
Works that are not proofread - My reviews aren't a spellchecker
Nonfiction

Things I WON'T Review

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Romance
Poetry
Lyrics

My To-Do List!
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I would love feedback on my reviews, to let me know how I can improve on my critiques and comments! Thanks

No romance? But Shrek is life; Shrek is love!

Need my novel reviewed... Trying to actually complete it but need to know if I need to edit it or not. Here's the beginning:
Walking Survival - Prologue

This is open again!

Hey there, could you please review:

Heroes of Aldrizhon (Prologue & Chapter 1)

Thanks in advance!

P/S: Love the display pic.

Hi. Could you please review my latest novel Thunder and Ice?

I'd love it if you could follow the whole story.

Here are the links to the chapters out.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Thunder-and-Ice-Prologue-130615

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Thunder-and-Ice-Chapter-One-130659

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Thunder-and-Ice-Chapter-Two-130804

The Last Light Companion [Chapter 1.1]

Please review that one. Thank you!

*Bump* this is back in business

I am trying for a review every three days, so I will try to get to these as fast as I can <3

I am looking for additional feedback on Voices of the Ice: Chapter 1

thank you very much.

Done @tigeraye

Would like for you to review my "story"/letter - Letter to a dead girl.

I apologize about the delay @shima but I will get right on that ^^

Back open! Give meee works!

If you’d like I’d love for you to take a look at the first part of my short story.

Calumet (1)

Hey so I don't know if this is or isn't up your alley, but take a look and let me know??
Review please!
The Unfinished Diary of TBJ (Part 4)

Part three and four have no reviews, but I would be ecstatic if you reviewed all four parts!

If you need anything reviewed let me know!

Thanks!