World War of Grammar

Dreamery · 2014-02-15T03:37:29Z

"At the Grammar Conference in London, England, war has been declared on the AGR, the Anti-Grammar Republic by a party called the ' Grammar Alliance ', otherwise known as the GAAF (Grammar Alliance Armed Forces)! Troops on either side have been assembled and are currently being mobilized! Two major forts have been established; one in Paris, France--Fort Adjective(GAAF)--and another in Munich, Germany--Fort TXT(AGR). Supplies are being manufactured and shipped out to the armies! Who knows how long this war will last? Enlist today to assist in the war effort (hopefully on the GAAF)! This "WWG" began because of a dispute over proper grammar after the conference in England! War rages between the AGR and GAAF and the troops are dwindling. The GAAF is outnumbered, but not outgunned. We need more troops! To enlist, simply post on this thread with your name , rank (starting with Pvt. unless otherwise told by me or other GAAF superiors), and level of experience. For example: Pvt. YWS_Person, two years in Advanced English. To rank up, simply document and post any grammar errors you've corrected in reviews (or other places, but most preferably reviews). Like The Knights of the Green Room, but with grammar. Your superiors will then judge your grammatical assistance and determine whether or not you will receive your "tags." Tags are what you'll use to level up in this place: On works in the Green Room: Thorough grammatical assault - Nine tags Moderate grammatical assault - Seven tags Little grammatical assault - Five tags Thorough grammatical assault - Five tags Moderate grammatical assault - Three tags Little grammatical assault - One tag YOUR NEXT RANK IS PVT. E-2 - YOU REQUIRE FIVE TAGS. List under revision: Private E-1 -> Private E-2 (5 tags) Private E-2 -> Private First Class (10 tags) Private First Class -> Specialist (20 tags) Specialist -> Corporal (25 tags) Corporal -> Sergeant (35 tags) Sergeant -> Staff Sergeant (40 tags) Staff Sergeant -> Staff Sergeant First Class (45 tags) Staff Sergeant First Class -> Master Sergeant (50 tags) Master Sergeant -> First Sergeant (55 tags) First Sergeant -> Sergeant Major (60 tags) Sergeant Major -> Command Sergeant Major (65 tags) Command Sergeant Major -> Sergeant Major of the Army (70 tags) Sergeant Major of the Army -> Second Lieutenant (85 tags) Second Lieutenant -> First Lieutenant (90 tags) First Lieutenant -> Captain (95 tags) FEEL FREE TO POST YOUR ASSAULTS AS JOURNAL ENTRIES, SOLDIER ACCOUNTS, ETC. MAKE HASTE , ADVENTURER! I REQUIRE YOUR KNOWLEDGE! The name of this particular 'E' . OFFICIAL GAAF DOCUMENTATION FORM(ASSAULTS) OF [YOUR RANK AND NAME HERE]: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-BY40HSQgkuA/TfZy3fBfc9I/AAAAAAAAAgc/5aMFkoKXkN4/s1600/joker.bmp AS A SUMMARY: Post your reviews with grammatical fixes with the documentation form here! Your superiors will, then, gauge how much you helped the author with their grammar and will give you tags based on that! REMEMBER, DO NOT ONLY POST GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES. YOU WANT TO HELP THE AUTHOR, SO POST AN ACTUAL REVIEW ON TOP OF THE ASSAULT. You may post your reviews prior to joining the ranks, but you MUST limit five. -GOA Dd

ulala8

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Sun Feb 23, 2014 3:09 am

ulala8 says... · Sun Feb 23, 2014 3:09 am

OFFICIAL GAAF DOCUMENTATION FORM(ASSAULTS) OF SERGEANT ULALA:

1. Labels
2. Monk's Neknomination 1
3. Untitled: Chapter 1
4. The Story Of Not
5. I will Not call you Father
6. She Thief
7. The Shifties: Chapter 1 - Lost

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Dreamery

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Wed Feb 26, 2014 3:27 am

Dreamery says... · Wed Feb 26, 2014 3:27 am

This is still alive, men (and women)! I'll be on temporary hiatus from this--lots and lots of homework. So, until then, I appoint @ulala8 to be my replacement until I return to the swing of things!

-GOA Dd.

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Wed Feb 26, 2014 10:58 pm

ulala8 says... · Wed Feb 26, 2014 10:58 pm

ddman18 wrote:This is still alive, men (and women)! I'll be on temporary hiatus from this--lots and lots of homework. So, until then, I appoint @ulala8 to be my replacement until I return to the swing of things!

-GOA Dd.

Yes sir!

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Wed Feb 26, 2014 11:50 pm

rhiasofia says... · Wed Feb 26, 2014 11:50 pm

Being Naughty(Actually very bad)!
Being Naughty(Actually very bad)!

The Lamppost
The lamppost

Overdose
Overdose

The Bear
The Bear

Through My Eyes of Destruction
Through My Eyes of Destruction

360 until you die
360° until you die

Your head is a living forest full of song birds
~E. E. Cummings

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ulala8

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Thu Feb 27, 2014 5:30 pm

ulala8 says... · Thu Feb 27, 2014 5:30 pm

Rhia Sofia's review:

1. 2 (This
2. 2 (And this are reviews that GOA Dd never got to)
3. 5
4. 4
5. (This one really doesn't deserve anything for grammatical purposes, but since you gave a nice review of the piece, I'll give you honourary points) 2
6. 7
7. 2
8. 2 (Two hyphens used together is supposed to be a dash. Published authours use them like that if they can't get a dash.)

Replacement General of Army Ulala called Rhia into Dd's office, where she was residing for the time being. She was lounging back in the plush leather chair (of which she could be seen sinking into quite a bit), hands folded before her and elbows resting upon the armrests. She brought the chair forward slightly as Rhia entered the office and she stood. She shook the soldier's hand before sitting once more in the re-positioned chair.
"I've heard a lot of good things about you, Private Rhia," she greeted, a smile blossoming upon her pink lips. "The soldiers weren't exaggerating. You've been doing remarkably, and progressing quickly. I apologize on Dd's behalf for the two missions that went unnoticed.
"While on that note, I am pleased to inform you that you have been promoted to Private E-2. Congratulations."

To Private First Class: 14/20

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Thu Feb 27, 2014 9:02 pm

rhiasofia says... · Thu Feb 27, 2014 9:02 pm

*Salutes* "Thank you, Ma'am"

Your head is a living forest full of song birds
~E. E. Cummings

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Tue Apr 08, 2014 11:18 pm

rhiasofia says... · Tue Apr 08, 2014 11:18 pm

Back with a grammar report

Goodbye, And I'll See You Soon

Low Place Like Home - Chapter 3

Liar, Liar

Sorceress: Chapter 5

The Dangers of Time

One single human emotion

words to the shadows

It's all so...realistic

Paparazzi promises

Your head is a living forest full of song birds
~E. E. Cummings

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Wed Apr 09, 2014 3:45 pm

ulala8 says... · Wed Apr 09, 2014 3:45 pm

Rhia Sofia's Review:

1. 2
2. 5
3. 3
4. 2
5. 2
6. 3
7. 5
8. 3
9. 3

Ranks Achieved: Private First Class, Specialist

12/25

I apologize for the mistake that I made on your previous report. It has been fixed.

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