Young Writers Society

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Hey, KaeRae here! First of all, can I just say I love the way you organized everything. Its super pretty and professional~ Okay let's jump right into it. The setting ...

Hey friend, Ellie here (again) to review one of your poetry pieces! I was a bit surprised when I saw the formatting of this piece, since I was expecting it ...

Fernando Lopez Fernando stands menacingly. He makes sure the man knows his prescence and feels it. He stares deep into the man's soul, drawing out the weakness from within. He ...

Hey Gengar! Wow, such an interesting concept for poetry. I read your description above and find this very interesting. I thought I'd give you some feedback on your poem, so ...

Hey friend, I am gonna leave you a quick review for your poem, 'Time heals'. Overall, I really love the formatting you used for this. It was very unique and ...

I should hopefully have mine up later today/tonight, i'm making good progress on it so far.

Blanchette Red Then we ran. We ran for so long, my legs felt like over-cooked noodles. Nevertheless, we ran on. We sprinted until the Forrest of Insecurity was a blotch ...

Never trust anyone.

Hello there! I have returned after my brief (long) departure from this series! I see that you’ve posted two new chapters which I have been yearning to get my hands ...

Yes! this poem is very relatable in a way. I can somewhat relate to this because I got my mothers looks and my fathers frustration. this goes through what its ...

Hey, Kaerae here again! Thought I would review the longer version since the first draft was amazing. First of all, I like the structure you added to this one. It ...

I really like this poem. It captures the feeling of when you like someone really well. It also tells of how if they do know you like them but you ...

Hello! I clicked on this poem as soon as I read the title because I love the front bottoms. I also read the description and it intrigued me to also ...

This is a longer version of one my previous poems by the same name

Hey, KaeRae here! I feel like this isn't much of a review, but I'm here anyway. I genuinely can't find anything to critique on. I like the use of the ...