Okay, wow. first off, your poem captures the struggle of wanting to spill my heart out but feeling stuck in a word maze perfectly! It's like a peek into the chaotic mind battles we all go through. The way you described it made me feel the tension and uncertainty. And that ending? Left me hanging, wanting more! Overall, your poem is real and relatable, and I'd love to read more!! Keep writing, you have a knack for poetry and I want to know more! - Cupid 💘
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