Young Writers Society

At one second, William and Gabriel are at the circus. At the next, they are in a ghostly, abandoned house.

Another sequel to my song "Circus Freak" and my prequel called "Circus Rose". I liked the theme, so I decided to continue it. I hope it sounds decent.

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Rose returns, feeling... just a bit... *yawn* slothful...

'I, Robot' Vibes for that character xD But I have a feeling they'll be one of my favs :3 @Spearmint

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Yep, I'm back :D Let's dive right in! So for context, I'm reviewing as I'm reading which helps me to not forget anything. Hope that's okay with you. I'm starting ...

The children who died are ghosts. They wander what used to be the school. One of them ate fruit which turned him from human to dragon. Now claws replaced his ...

Hellooo Rebel! Here to leave a review. Hope you're hungry because I'll be serving an original Oreo cookie style commentary. I've spent some time away from YSW, but am eager ...

Just a thing I came up with while cycling home from Psychology tuition and seeing some nice little tulips.

Hello Hello! It's your friendly neighborhood Ranger again, back to leave another (although a little more then slightly late) review! I hope you've been having a good day and what ...

Hello! Thanks for sharing this work. The sentiment it expresses is lovely. I really like the concept of being the music that reaches a person's heart. I feel like this ...

Okay, I'll be reviewing as I read along I don't particularly get along with god either. actually, I hate religion. it makes my skin crawl. not only that, but I ...

Hello There! ~ Writing Commentary All the buildings were either demolished or badly destroyed, shattered shards of glass and broken off pieces of concrete were everywhere. The air was colder ...

Hey, aren't you the one who wrote a speech about people commiting suicide? I have yet to read it; I'll review as I read a long. But I hope things ...

Hello Stranger! ~ Writing Commentary Hello there! I am happy that you liked my previous comment! I would like to give a formal review of your story with my own ...