Young Writers Society

Penelope attempts to heal a bruise John gets, but her self-doubt only makes it even worse.

Wow! This was a great and spinechilling read! Let me give some of my formal thoughts... Hello there! ~ Writing Commentary Jenna began to scream in her sleep. Rushing into ...

Rose meets Asura and a few others that she knows

Hello there, Akira! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - After everything, the protagonist has finally found a ...

Unfortunately, I don't think it's going to happen right now but maybe later?

Very well written! I am sure many of us here will relate to this short conversation that takes place here between the two friends. It seems to be poured out ...

Hello there! I am here to give you a review on your piece of work. What a tale, I enjoyed reading this from the start to the finish. This storyline ...

#23 Dances in the Sky Poetic Style - 2 - Spoken Word Inspiration - 1 - Title Coin Flip - Heads - Use as prompt Title: "Sky Full of Song" ...

:eyes: yessssss >:] and i don't have the money or space for a super large display, unfortunately xD buuttt if you do have higher quality versions of "hurricane ridge", "northern ...

Self-explanatory.

Name Me Icarus (Shoot Me Down Before the Sun Does) Today's Inspiration: Today’s song was Sky Full of Song by Florence + the Machine. I rolled author’s choice with the ...

Hello Hello I hope you dont mind me popping in a review. Now I cant remember if I have reviewed your work before ( If so I am so so ...

So excited to see what happens next! Let's jump right in! That upon which my dragon's eye fixed Kita was almost tempted to retort, until she realized -through the exaggeration- ...

Hello Damian. Niteowl here to review. First, I'd like to note a couple larger issues that are keeping me from getting into the work. There's a heavy dialect in both ...

When I smiled: That was a cool discussion about the ocul. Echo seems like a generally interesting creature.I am really interested to learn more about it. I also like that ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Well ths is quite the little start here. ...