Hello Hello, I hope you dont mind me popping in with a quick review. This might not be super in depth however I do hope that it will at least brighten your day, I will also quickly mention that I haven't read the others so sorry If get something wrong. Let's get into it, shall we?
Overall I cant say I have much feedback nothing stuck out to me that tripped up the reading experience. Or nothing too noticeable at the very least although upon a second reading, I might be able to pinpoint some stuff.
I felt like this was a good ending even without reading the others I get the feeling that at least for now it's all wrapped up and somewhat happy. I also like the slow pace and the soft energy it gives off it's nice and cozy in the best way. You Did a good job portraying the feeling that reflection can hold.
I also enjoyed the theme of growth and change. However, I do think the use of grave is a interesting one as I am sure it is a reference to an earlier poem but it gives a good sense of contrast.
It could represent past events and moving on filling the grave with who she used to be or it could be a real grave. Either way, it adds this sense of unspoken unease where everything might not be as cheery as we think. It makes the reader think about it and if it is meant to be this little pearl of darkness hidden in the warm tone.
Although a short review on my end I really liked this one great job .
As always keep writing and remember to drink water!
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