Hello, Stranger! I'm Wist here to leave a review for your poem.
I want to start by saying that I adore when poets try to find poetry in the unpoetic, and your meme format is no different! It takes something most people know about and puts a unique poetic spin on it to make it your own. Also, the cultural context of the meme helps readers figure out what emotions you're trying to convey with your poem, especially since you're writing two contradicting ideas. The first image of Drake looking away shows the reader this stanza expresses the opposite of the speaker's intentions and true feelings. While Drake's more positive face shows that the second stanza is the message the reader should walk away with! Maybe you just wrote it to be silly, but I'm telling you all this to encourage you to continue exploring this style! I think it's more of a tool than you might realize.
Now, let's move on to the words themselves. Your poem plays the classic struggle between changing yourself to like others and staying true to your authentic self, which is always an excellent trope to play with, especially when you explore it uniquely, such as your meme form. Exploring relatable topics like that is a beautiful way to appeal to a larger audience when introducing a new form that others might not know how to react to. So, good choice of theme! Regarding diction, I would say that you stuck to a pretty simple word bank throughout your poem, but don't take that as a bad thing! Since memes are casual, an overly flowery and formal vocabulary would probably not fit well with them. So, a simple and casual word choice is a great fit!
Overall, Kate, this is a fun poem! It wears its form well and still conveys a timeless theme despite its goofy nature. I'm glad to have read it, and I hope you keep exploring all of the silly avenues of poetry!
Happy Writing!
Wist
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