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Hi there Now, is it hot in here or what? I like your poem, it reminds me of my house. You have a gift here. I liked how you were ...

Hello I like it. Yes. I think its different and refreshing and deep. I also did not spot any spelling errors. I especially enjoyed the first paragraph because you were ...

When these Princes died off, they had their powers striped from them, I think you mean stripped. This should be interesting. Great story line you have here. I think though, ...

Hello I have always been fond of repetition in poetry. I guess it irritates some people but I think that poetry can be expressed in different ways, ways in which ...

Hi there I am sorry but I am not sure if I understand what you are aiming for here. But then again, I feel that there is deep emotion in ...

Hello Well, it is a different way to approach a subject like this. I definitely like the structure of the poem and the flow of your words. They are deep ...

Hello I liked this story a lot really. There were some few spelling mistakes in there though. The one strong suggestion I could give you is that when you write ...

Hey. Well, this was probably the best story I have reviewed today. I love the fact that there is emotion and I can feel it. Even though it is something ...

Hey :) Well, first of all I love the picture. It totally rocks. Your story definitely shows some potential. I felt though that you did not approach your subject well. ...

Hey there. Alright, I will be nice. I thought the poem was great...(and this is not because I am being nice). I feel you are tackling a very sensitive issue ...

Hello :) He through on his jacket and sped out the door. I think you were going for 'threw'. Well, the story line is really nothing special; I have to ...

Hello there This is the first time I actually review a story so I hope I help. I grew up with every girls toddler dream. Don't you mean 'every girl ...

Hello I could not have said it better myself. These are true wise spoken words. I liked the poem. It was simple and to the point. I had a problem ...

Hello It really did not feel like I was reading a poem here. Maybe the beginning of a story perhaps. And I really did not feel any poetic elements. But, ...

Hello Yep, you delivered here girl. This is some great stuff. You did a good job at keeping the poem dark and stormy like I expected which is why I ...