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Hello there Well this is a beautiful poem. It is touching or emotional, I love it. The events were actually how I expected them to turn out, which is nothing ...

Hello there Err, well, I think in this case the good ol' traditional stanza format would have done the job. I will be honest but I don't like this whole ...

Hi there This was awesomely sweet and romantic. I like the repeating line because it fits into the mood. I also enjoyed the general flow and your choice of words. ...

Hello Well this is my first shot at reviewing a script and I am pretty sure what I have to say will not be of assistance to you. But, I ...

Hey So this is getting interesting. I had the following problems: Everythings so fuzzy I think you should add 'was' in there. Something you should remember, when you quote, leave ...

Hey there I love the quote, it is so wise; I had an 'you're right!' moment. I did not think though that you did the words justice in terms of ...

Hey there I think I have been reviewing your poetry for quite a while now and I think you have a gift of getting away with the short poems. It's ...

Hi there aquareed I thought I would do the honours :) So, you seem to have something good here. The idea is promising, nothing new or different but it can ...

Hello Hmm. What a thought provoking poem. I like your style and what I enjoyed the most was the structure of the poem. It is different from what I see ...

Hello there Well, the third chapter is posted already? I just reviewed the second right now. I have been off 'air' for a while. I think generally my comment will ...

Hello I must have missed this when you posted it. Now I had to read chapter one first to try and remember where I was? :D Anyways, this chapter, the ...

Woow Hello there, I am speechless. What a lovely story. And I cannot believe that you are going to make me wait for part two and three, I want to ...

Hi there First of all, I am a huge fan of Phineas and Ferb. Where did you find that adorable avatar? :P Alright back to business. I think the story ...

Hi there NiteStrike This poem definitely shows some potential. I can feel what you feel :smt001 . But there is something that gets me confused as it progresses, But every ...

Hello This is a great believable poem. It is simple and I like it. I like how you described your actions and your rhyming technique. I try to force sleep ...