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Hello there Right. I hope I don't sound mean but this is a disaster. Some parts of your poem did not seem like a poem but something else. I will ...

Hello there I really think that this poem lacked a lot of emotion or good execution. It is a great idea and I totally get what you are going for, ...

Hello there and welcome I like this poem a lot. I think you did a pretty good job. The ending is just unexpected. Beautiful stuff hey. I really have nothing ...

hello once again Well, hats off to you first of all. I loved the story evidently but I have to say I am little disappointed with the there a part ...

Hello there I thought the flow of the poem was graceful and I liked it. I liked the way you described the feelings and actions during the performance. She has ...

Hello there and welcome. To be honest, I really did not understand this poem. I don't know, maybe its because of the lack of punctuation or something else. I battled ...

Hello there I will be honest, I was not very fond of this poem. It...lacked something, some adventure. I was seriously expecting a bus to infinity and I got a ...

:lol: The last line pretty much sealed the deal. Well, hello there Nova. I liked this poem very much. It was witty and quick and very true. I am not ...

Hello there Kingolions I loved this poem, wow. It is something different, it is refreshing. I just like the transition from day to night over and over. I mean at ...

Hello there Romeyo I love the whole arrangement first of all. It is really creative. I quite enjoyed your piece. I found absolutely nothing wrong with it when I was ...

Hello there and welcome! So, I noticed that you were able to put a lot of emotion in there and I actually liked this poem a lot. But I agree ...

Hello there Look, I don't care how long part three is, I want to finish the story :P I really think that you have a gift of describing situations eloquently. ...

Hello there “Will right? I think you forgot something in this line, it does not make sense. Just a quick reminder; you tend to use words like 'wasn't' instead of ...

Hello there Well, I like the picture. it's so bright and clear. The summer air, even at night, was a bit to hot for my liking. I think you meant ...

Hello there Um, maybe there's a problem with your computer? :) Anyways, I will be honest and say that I did not feel any emotion in this poem. It was ...