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Hello Kjthewriter! Thanks for the review! I'm here now to return the favor! -You used good imagery talking about the river, but while you’re describing the river you use two ...

Hello TheSoundOfRain! ‘Tis the Yubster here for a review. I’ll have to say, I was expecting something a bit more cliché, like a dragonfly humming through the grass. I was ...

Hey Wonder! It's the Yubster here to review this poem, "I Have Lost My Dogs". YWS Review Day Sandwich. First off, What I like: -This poem flows well and has ...

It's the Yubster here to Review this poem for you today, review day! I'm going to follow the YWS review day sandwich, meaning: Im going to start with the good ...

Hey! It is the Yubster here to review for you! I don't usually review poetry too hard, so don't be afraid, I don't bite! First things first, I love the ...

Hello there Yohana55! It is the Yubster coming around to review this poem, "Ignorance is bliss" for you today... I’m going to do some simple nit picks right away, but ...

Oh wow...You are amazing! And by the way, It is the Yubster again, here to deliver a cheerful and hopefully useful review! I only have one or two painless nit ...

Hello there bubblewrapped! By the way, I adore your username! Anywhoo, It's the Yubster here to review for you today! The visual images created in the first half of the ...

I just finished reviewing another one of your poems and I'm just amazed with this one as the other one. as I said before, I'm definetly down on my knees ...

Hiya! The yubster is here again to review another terrific piece of poetry, and this one caught my attention. I won't be too hard on you today therealme, but I ...

First things first. I don't usually review poetry, but give me some slack if I do a really horrible job. You, however, did your part and wrote a marvelous and ...

This is a creative way to show onomatopoeia. The small snapshots you created with short snappy sentences created a slow-motion world for me and I could hear the hazy heartbeats ...

Wow! Its obvious that you have put alot of emotion and thought into this piece of poetry. The stanzas look nice together, and the odd number of lines on the ...

I'll have to admit it, your title grabbed me. It just seemed so bizarre that i just had to check it out. Good things: your imagery was fantastic. I especially ...

the vivid words you used brought the poem to life! The structure of the poem is perfect. I couldn't find a perfect beat, but not all poems need one. The ...