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Hey there! This will be my tenth review this Review Day! I'm so pumped! It's okay if stories are short! I really don't like reading really long stories, so this ...

I love the description of the fabric at the beginning. There are a few tweaks I would suggest to this poem though. I believe the third line would sound better ...

Wow. I love, absolutely love, how you used the italics to show the child thinking and/or speaking. This poem has so many good qualities, I truly could not find something ...

Hello ALostPoet! I heard that you are new! So, let me roll out the welcome mat by giving you a review! This really hit home because this is exactly what ...

Hello! I'm back to do another review! While I truly enjoyed this poem, It was definitely lacking. The rhyming scheme was choppy and unorganized, leaving a bad impression. However, the ...

I love this so much EnigmaticSpirit! It makes me feel so warm and fuzzy inside! The beginning was mediocre, the middle, plain, but the ending, magnificent! The ideas just begin ...

I don't usually review short stories, so I'm giving it my best shot! This stood out because of the title. What makes you feel orange? An excellent question. I would ...

While the flow of this poem is choppy and disoriented and is difficult to read, I enjoyed it very much. The short lines kind of left me hanging. I'd really ...

The opening line to this poem is probably the most profound thing in this work. Imagine a world of peace. It draws the reader in, having them starting their brains, ...

Greetings and Salutations! It is I, yubbies, here to review this poem for you! Excellent job! This, I'll have to say is a remarkable piece! I love it! My favorite ...

Hello ChasingLaci! I was scrolling through the poetry section looking for something to review, and your title caught my eye! "A Beautiful Mess". It sounds happy and sad at the ...

Thanks for the review request! To start off, I'll have to say that I was confused a bit at the beginning. "This has nothing to do with orchids!" I thought ...

I have never seen nor heard of Sherlock, but it was amazing how quickly I got interested in it. It is obvious that you put alot of careful effort and ...

I loved this story! This is quite an original idea. The main character is genius, good job on giving her a believable personality (nobody like a Mary/Gary Sue). Like ShadowHunter ...

Hello DrStrangelove! I'm here to review this piece of prose. Now, I usually review poetry, so this will be a bit of a stretch for me. I'll try and talk ...