Hey there! This will be my tenth review this Review Day! I'm so pumped!
It's okay if stories are short! I really don't like reading really long stories, so this is perfect! Even though it is small, it has wonderful descriptions!
The street lights were doing a decent job of trying to turn night into day. Their light made the road look as if it had tiny diamonds embedded in it. The streets were steadily losing population, and things were calming down.
This was really good! Maybe make it a little teensy-weensy itty-bitty bit longer? I'd love to se more description, what the inside of the bus smells like, what the passengers are doing (sleeping, eating, reading, staring out the window, etc.), what the
guys looks like. I had questions about him. What color is his hair? eyes? Did he have a tan? Does he have muscles? Is he wearing cologne?incredibly good looking.
Happy Review Day!
yubbies21
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Reviews: 170
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