youngwolf1105

I like that I get a good image just from reading these few lines. But its so short I don't know what its about. Yet you continue to inspire me. ...

Holy crapness that rocked!! It really made me think about it. And I like how you express the soul as another being that needs to fed, loved and cared for. ...

Sheesh, these people are harsh. I loved it! Not many people can see the real beauty in this. While I oppose to the use of the Goddesses name in such, ...

Omg, I love this! But it's kind of over done, the whole vampre thing. I've written many like this, theres the King and he wants to be followed. Except in ...

OMG, this is so adorable! Since it's a song, and songs are never truely grammatically correct, I won't go into that. But it's just so adorabel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You know, I like this. But I'm confused. Is it wrote in the omnisecent point of view? Because at the end it had a snippet of Margies thoughts. And what ...

Awesomeness! I really like it, and that it's real poetry and not rhyme. While rhyming is considered poetry, I don't think so. I believe that it's childish. No worries, I ...

I like it! I do believe that you're the next peot laureate! The things you write on a whim amaze me. Like your creativity, your grammer, everythig really. You're so ...

Wow, I really like this and it's got my mind of a few troubles for awhile. I wish you would turn this into a novel, it'd be super awesome and ...

It's really good, I like it but you only have a few problems with it. 1. YOu need to capatilize your Is, even on YWS. 2. You should put more ...

I like it, but it's kinda boring........ Otherwise good. Try to put more emotion in it! It's dry, like there's nothing more than the words on the page. Try this ...

Wow, interesting. Is that from personal experience? You don't have to answer that. But I do have a few concerns. 1. It kinda roams a little, keep on task. 2. ...

That was really cool, I loved it! I only have a few concerns... 1. "Because while Hallows' Eve has passed, the nightmares are here to stay." It'll correct the whole ...

It's really good my little Wiccan, I only have one immediate concern. All of it rymes, except the first two lines. Then I can't find a pattern. So it's all ...

Hey, wassup? I'm Youngwolf and would like to welcome you to YWS as well. Altogether, I liked it. But there are a few things that I'd like to point out. ...