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Re: Entropy - Chapter Three
OKAY I am HERE! Shall we begin? To say I can hear the crickets deep into this building of thick walls is an overstatement but her silence remains disturbing. First, ...
Jan 22, 2021 -
Re: Sauce-y
Hey Horisun! Long time no see! I realize I haven't reviewed any of your works in a while so why not here? Let's get started, shall we? I breathe you ...
Jan 21, 2021 -
Re: "The invisible fist"
Hey @roshielramirez! I'm Yoshi and I'm here for a review on this poem! First, this poem is dramatic-- nice. However, it might be . . . TOO dramatic, if you ...
Jan 18, 2021 -
Re: Entropy - Chapter Two
Wow! Very intriguing story! Red. In every birth that's the first color I recognize. Not a white light or an empty darkness. I see flowing colors of red. This intro ...
Jan 18, 2021 -
Re: on examining life
Screeech! Yoshi is here! Hey lim, great poem by the way! First, I think this is a really interesting, philosophical poem! I love it! Poems with deeper meanings are always ...
Jan 18, 2021 -
Re: Entropy - Chapter One
Hi @raindrops! I'm Yoshi and I'm here for a review! First off, this is a pretty engaging start! I love it! Let's get started with the review then, shall we? ...
Jan 18, 2021 -
Re: The Night Apperentice- chapter 1
Hi @Ducklinstories! I'm Yoshi and I'm here for a review on this awesome piece of work! First off, I liked this work! It's very entertaining and interesting. Fire rose from ...
Jan 17, 2021 -
Re: Uncrossable Canyons
Hi @giovannagaia! I'm Yoshi and I'm here for your review! Fear spoke to me in a tender voice when I realized that between two people there is an uncrossable canyon. ...
Jan 10, 2021 -
Re: Chime of the Clockwork
Hi Blake's stories and poems! I'm Yoshi and I'm here for your review! Let's get started, shall we? First Impression: I really think this is an interesting story. It's really ...
Jan 4, 2021 -
Re: ...
Hi @QuoolQuo! I'm here for a review! Interesting story you have here! Can't seem to remember anyone else having such a unique idea! Anyways, let's get started, shall we? Rosaline ...
Jan 4, 2021 -
Re: Part of the gang
Hi Gurkensalat! I'm Yoshi and I'm here for a review! Belated welcome to YWS, by the way! I'm glad you're here! Let's get started, shall we? The din from the ...
Jan 3, 2021 -
Re: the last time
Hi @lillianna! I'm Yoshi and I'm here for your review! Grammatical your eyes i remember the way they used to light up like stars when i walked into the room ...
Jan 2, 2021 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 10.2.1
*Sneaks over here* Hey! I really liked your other chapter so I'mma review this! Jerica was trembling by the time she got to her bedroom. Today was going to be ...
Jan 2, 2021 -
Re: The beginning of the end...
Hi! I'm Yoshi and I'm here for your review! Let's get this started, all right? The year was 2025 and the pandemic was long over, nothing was ever going to ...
Jan 2, 2021 -
Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 10.1
Hi! This is one of your requested reviews! “Baba!” Rek’s voice was gravelly and full of sleep. He let go of her hand, trying to push himself a bit more ...
Jan 1, 2021
