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yoshikrab

when life gives you lemons . . . i don't know . . . i don't like lemons

  • Novel / Chapter » General, Science Fiction Re: Jontur - (2) Finn

    Alright, here we go I am BACK for another review! It's been a while since the last chapter, so I'm going to be cross-referencing chap 1 and my last review, ...

    Dec 24, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: Daddy’s girl

    Hey there, I'm back for more ^^ Okay, so I don't really dabble in fanfiction, so I'm glad you wrote a detailed author's note to explain what the heck is ...

    Dec 7, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The remarriage of Penelope and John

    Hi, I'm here for a review! I'll admit I'm missing a lot of context, but I think there's a lot to be inferred just from this short piece. First, it's ...

    Dec 7, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Jontur - (1) The Previous Mission

    Hi Tikaya! I haven't written a review in a while, but I'm glad I can get the honor of being a reviewer to your first work posted on YWS! I ...

    Nov 30, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 4

    Hey it's been a while. I'm super busy with college apps, so it's been hard to get on this site and sit down and review, but I'm ready to sit ...

    Sep 7, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 3

    Here I come for another review! Don't want to waste your time so let's get started!!! “Easy now. Just take it slow,” A male voice said in the human language. ...

    Sep 3, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Horror Re: When Jason first visited Amelia

    Hey frenno, I'm back for another review!! I just noticed that these stories seem to all be connected, cause I was looking at some of your other stuff, and there's ...

    Sep 1, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 1

    Hey dragonight! I've been seeing this work in the green room for a while and decided to give it a shot. I'll try to leave a review whenever I can! ...

    Aug 31, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: You will never understand him like I do

    Heya i am back again!! I see you really like horror; looks like it's a thread connecting all of your stories, so I guess I'll have to brace myself if ...

    Aug 30, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: “Now that you’re gone”

    Hello frenno, I'm back for another review. There sure are a lot of your works in the green room! You definitely have a LOT of things to write about, that's ...

    Aug 30, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The death of Dakota’s family

    Heya creeperfeverdreams! (whether i should call you creeper or fever or dreams or something else entirely let me know :P) I haven't been on this site in ages, but I've ...

    Aug 29, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: to be known is to be loved

    Heya yoshi here for a review!!! (Been a while since I've done this so set me back on track if I do something wrong) At face value, this poem definitely ...

    May 12, 2024
  • Poetry » Literature, Other Re: Father Time

    Hey jazi! Wow, I wasn't really expecting much from a poem titled "Father Time", but there's something about the raw emotion and dialogue-like style of the poem that really hits ...

    Oct 28, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Existential

    Heyo! Haven't written too many reviews in a while, but it's review day, so I guess I'll join in the fun! So this seems like a poem is kind of ...

    Oct 28, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Five Wishes ~Chapter One~

    hiya came here since you subtly mentioned your novel in one of your reviews and I guess I'm here now hehe Anyways, I'm going to start off by saying this ...

    Jul 4, 2023


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