*This fanfic is under my folder titled “The vampire diaries fanfics!”. This is a fix-it fanfic from the show “Legacies”, which is a spin-off of the shows “The Originals” and “The Vampire Diaries”. I personally didn’t enjoy “Legacies” much, because I only watched like two episodes, but I liked the first two shows better. Basically it’s from an episode where one of the characters’ daughters sees him killing somebody viciously and acts all terrified. I didn’t like her reaction because I thought it was “too human” of her to act and she loved her Dad before (Her Dad is Klaus Mikaelson, a vicious vampire-werewolf hybrid who loves his daughter dearly) so I didn’t really understand it. I also might be biased because I have a crush on Klaus, but alas, I wrote this fanfic anyway. Gacha Club character designs are under my forum titled “My character designs<33[2]”. Enjoy it and Happy Frightful Father’s Day!*
Hope closed her eyes. She was going to see Dad, whether Mom liked it or not.
She thought of all the precious moments spent with him, the moments he gave her flowers and took her to see the butterflies. The smile he made whenever he saw her.
She was going to see him again.
……………………………………………………..
She felt a calmness settle in the air, an indication that she had arrived wherever he was. Hope opened her eyes.
She expected Dad to be on a computer, doing some kind of important, grown-up work.
She didn’t expect him to be in a house, bleeding bodies surrounding him.
He slowly turned around, facing her. He was covered from his mouth to his chest in deep, red blood.
They didn’t say anything. They just stared at each other. He was panting, his eyes were wild. This wasn’t something she was supposed to see.
An appropriate reaction would be to scream, cry, and run away.
But Hope wasn’t scared.
Because the man standing in front of her was Dad, the same man who held her close, read her stories, told her not to be ashamed of who she was.
He told her that she was a vampire, werewolf, and a witch altogether. That she was magic and a monster. That the fairytales painted people like him and her as villains, but that it didn’t change who they really were.
In fact, the sight of the blood was making her starve. She hadn’t tasted food since dinner and dinner wasn’t very satisfying.
She walked up to a bleeding body, a pretty young lady in a soft white dress and held her soft wrist.
Then, Hope closed her eyes and sank her teeth into the woman’s wrist.
“Hope?” He asked, still panting.
She didn’t respond. She just let the blood sink into her mouth, fill her with joy, fill her with clarity, fill her with life, fill her with renewal.
She smiled as she heard Dad feeding too.
They were finally together and that was all that mattered.
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These shows are on Netflix and are also based off a book series written by L.J. Smith.
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Okay, so I don't really dabble in fanfiction, so I'm glad you wrote a detailed author's note to explain what the heck is going on lol.
So, from what I understand, Hope is a vampire and the source material had her reacting to a killing too human-like, so you wanted to change it to make it more monster-y. Correct me if I'm wrong, but that's what I'll assume for now.
Not sure why there's a divider here, as the first section is 1) pretty short and 2) doesn't have a lot of action going on in a different scene or moment, so I would suggest just removing the divider. It flows better for the reader, and I think it doesn't change the narrative that much.
so I'm assuming the appropriate reaction is the one you're fixing LMAO
But now it makes me wonder, is Hope actually a vampire? I was assuming she is because her dad is, but if she's human (however that works) it makes this story all the more chilling. The last line is great! Good dramatic irony because yes, for her, the two of them being together is all that matters, but the reader knows she basically just sucked a corpse's blood, which might also matter a little bit, maybe...
Great work! see you soon
yosh
Yes that%u2019s exactly the reaction I was fixing lol.
Hope is a vampire, but she is also a werewolf. She also does magic. Her father, Klaus, is a vampire/werewolf hybrid and her Mom, Hailey, is a werewolf.
Thx for reading! :>
I can totally understand the reason for writing this fic. You go and make things happen like they are supposed to happen xd
Oh Hope, can teleport, am I understanding these descriptions right? Nice!
It’s especially that sentence that clued me in: “an indication that she had arrived wherever he was.”
I do like that she’s truly Klaus’ daughter in this. Like, she sees the blood and things: “Hm, haven’t eaten anything in a while”
Aww I like this ending, like the 2 final lines. Very fitting =D
It's not teleportation, Hope is using magic from her grimoire to sort of like astral project into wherever Klaus is. She's half vampire and half werewolf and also a witch. Klaus is half vampire and half werewolf. Her Mom, Hailey,is a werewolf.
Thx for reading!