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Ooooh! *chills* The same could be said towrds my oboe. ^_^ *gazes lovingly at oboe* AWESOME piece. I love it. Ten gold stars! ********** :D

Horrifying but beautifully depicted. I found nothing wrong with it. A+ quality material. :P I love the emotion, or lack there of, that you were able to pull the reader ...

Great poem! I love butterflies too. :) They've been everywhere recently! (\../)  (/\) My pathetic attempt at making a little butterfly thingie... *shrug* :D

This was really good. Sorry I don't have time to point everything out, but you have some places where it's confusing as to who's doing what. It hink there might ...

Way too cliched. Anyone can write this. Sorry to sound so harsh. I started out like that too, but you'll learn and get better. :) Anyways, welcome to the YWS! ...

It's choppy. I'm not going to point them all out, but there are a lot of places where you break a line or even a stanza and it jolts the ...

Beautiful. I can totally connect. I'm printing this if you don't mind. :D Great rant. I love rants. I rant all the time. And I'm ranting now. Look at me!!! ...

I must say, this is quite awesome. I think the "polysyllabic words" give it character. Interesting style though. Awesome poem... very deep. I really enjoyed this, although I had to ...

I liked they rhyming in this, simply because I can't rhyme to save my life, so good job with that. But the subject and content is way too overused. Almost ...

I think it's being overanalyzed. I think it's just a fun sorta silly poem. You can't look deeply into a silly poem. You just can't. Great job though! Seriously made ...

Reminds me of when my grandparents told me how they got to school. It was ten miles uphill bothways, in three feet of snow in the middle of summer with ...

I think this is one of the best things you've written, truthfully. It's very good. I can't crit to save my life. Just wanted you to know. It's really, really ...

Awesome poem. I can relate, definitely. The ending was awesome, I must agree there with bubblewrapped. I like these lines because they are soooo true: "And the lack of gentlemen ...

Adorable. It makes me want to be a kid again. :) It also inspries me to go write so off I go! :D Awesome job.

Yay! I love eyes. I am oddly fascinated with them. So it means a lot for me to tell you this is good. This is my favorite stanza: "They are ...