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Hey Gravity! Where did the 'defying' go? xD This was a great piece! This review's going to be pretty short since I couldn't nitpick any flaws, but I hope it ...

Hi Jumpyspot! So...I love the whole idea, I'm enjoying your writing style and it's all got me hooked. I look forward to reading the next chapters! *eyes you, quietly willing ...

Hi JasmineC! Okay, so this is an amazing poem. It has alot of depth and, inspite of being short, leaves the reader with a heavy feeling. Found just a few ...

Hi Purple! Very nice poem here, with depth meaning. I'm sure all the readers could relate to some extent. "And frankly I'm a hoarder when I have to deal with ...

Hi jazzydracula, Yastika here for a review! First off, I really like your plot, it's interesting and keeps the readers hooked. Your style of writing suits the story. I really ...

Hi Noelle! This was a really, really good story! And it's good to see that some people are actually able to continue what they're writing, unlike some lazy bums (cough, ...

Hi Vibe! Okay, first off, really good poem! It was nice, meaningful and left an impression on the reader. I noticed you haven't used any punctuation. Was this intentional? Normally, ...

Hi jackm1999! This was a really interesting piece, I love how you've portrayed the future. Found just a few nitpicks...here they are! "The world’s leading company’s at the time, Apple, ...

Hello Delirium! First off, this was a really, really good piece. It was beautifully descriptive and your words were expressive and fit together perfectly. The ending- last line, to be ...

Hello Purple! This was the kind of poem that makes me appreciate silence. I have no idea why, but it's an amazing feeling. The poem had alot of depth and ...

Hello OrionRising! This was an amazingly fantabulous poem! I loved the crisp humour and your usage of words was very smart. This has to be one of my personal favourites ...

Hello Vibe! This was a really nice, meaningful poems...with just a few nitpicks for me to pick out! Okay, lets get started. First thing I noticed, very little attention has ...

This was a interesting piece, the meaning passed was really important. "Beating on my brain like the drums of the tribe, " I like the comparison to 'the drums of ...

Hi Thewriter13! I loved this poem! And you definitely succeeded in using your happy metaphors! Your descriptions were amazing! "My thoughts are swirling like the pouring of Delicious frozen yogurt ...

Hello! So, first off, this was an amazing piece of poetry! It was really meaningful and passes a important message! Good job with the flow! I felt the last line ...