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Hey hey hey, let's do this thing. The first thing that struck me was the Lolita kind of childish innocence you've captured in this poem- it may be unsettling, but ...

Hello there. This a lovely short poem, so there isn't much I can point out technically- but it's definitely thought provoking and I'd like to illustrate that. The elements of ...

hello hello hello, let's jump right into this. The first thing one notices is the narrator's ostensible aversion to actuality, which intrigues me immediately because I'm a sick romantic. They've ...

This poem is a triumph- you have impressed me indefinitely, but there is still slight scope for improvement. I think a little editing will definitely birth a masterpiece. I love ...

Hello pretty. First off, congratulations on this poem's lovely sentiment. We can never have enough book lovers. This is one aspect that will be wholly relatable for many readers. Your ...

Hello darling. I'm ever a fan of your works, and this doesn't disappoint at all. Over time, I've realised not to try limit your usage of spaces or capitals, and ...

Hey Noelle! All your cheering helped a lot, imagining you with pom poms in a cheerleaders outfit had me snorting with laughter I'm finally back to reviewing! Mostly, your story ...

Hi Lumi! This was a great piece here. It had deep meaning, and incredible description. It portrayed fragility, and yet there was firmness in the words. Your flow was good, ...

Hi Lakshmi! Yastika here for a review as requested! This was a beautiful poem, it had this lingering sadness, yet bold strength in every word that captivates the readers. I ...

Hey Tay! *giggles* The rhyme was totally unintentional! ;) Okay, you've got a good idea here, it's simple, fun and easy to understand. In general sense, it's pretty good, but ...

Hi LogicAndObjections! This was such a meaningful poem! It holds a lesson for all of us. I enjoyed reading it, the rhyme making it nice and flowy. The message at ...

Hi Lumi! This was such a beautiful honestly will leave every reader moved. It has incredible depth and meaning, every word is strong and expresses a lot. Your usage of ...

Hi unknown391625! I noticed your avatar was a Percy Jackson fan art (right?) Do you read Percy Jackson too? But that's beside the point, I'm here to review you extremely ...

Hey Ron! Oh, wait...Hey americanidol82! I'm a huge fan of the Harry Potter books, and I adore Ronald Weasley! Do you too? But that's beside the point, I'm here to ...

Hi Gravity! I reviewed one of your poems awhile back and wanted to read more of them, so here I am! I loved your descriptions, they give the reader a ...