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thank you so much, i will try my best to improve my poems thnx again :)

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nice work with great lines like "Hear your own words concealed In the undertow of their words and voice. I understand; of all people I do" keep the good work ...

lovely short poem that mean alot, cs most of people feel the same way, lonely and sad, i liked when you said "I sit here... Alone... I cry here... Alone... ...

very createfull and interesting poem

awsome It is March third, 1348 and you have become my dearly departed I have lived, and I have laughed and of course I have loved But most importantly I ...

nice very nice,keep the good work

i loved it

very good

i loved this poem. keep the hard work

hello i really like this poem, it's full of feelings and i'm sorry for your neighbour who passed away keep writting like this :)