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Thank you so very much. I'm glad you liked.

Thanks so much! I love constructive criticism. it is the people like you who teach me how to write and whom I write for.

It is a part of a story, and I absolutely adore that you took time to tell me all of this! I shall take it all into account. The second ...

Haha, yeah. Thanks for the response. I will cherish it forever!! XD

Hm...well, personally, I don't think it's one of your better works. Also, in the second stanza, shouldn't it be "look" instead of "looks"? However, I really do enjoy the end. ...

Thanks, hadn't even noticed. And it was a typo. The bold/italic for that one sentence was supposed to be sneering sarcasm. Guess I didn't get that. If you need me ...

I adore this! And if you really want to kill me, I'll let you. Just make sure that it's not a very foolish death. Also, the way you wrote it ...

...thanks.

Depressing, isn't it? But very well written. Now, where shall I start this review? -Nice use of italics. I can feel some of the raw emotion bleeding through from the ...

I really like this so far. There's a couple grammar issues you need to work on, but nothing too serious. Through Galen's narration I found a few powerful lines. And ...

Sure. I didn't think too much about some details. Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it. No, he wasn't named after Kakashi... but it would be cool if he ...

You are much better than I am as a person. People tend to think of me as the "Eternal Pessimist". But whatever. It's a decent poem, not one of my ...

This is a nice concept. I noticed a spelling error (sentance, instead of sentence) but besides that, it's very nice. I do like the vocabulary usage, and I particularly like ...

This is good. I noticed the one error that Stellabeam pointed out, but nothing more. I love poetry, and this poem conveys a lot of emotion to something that everyone ...