xv0nillaWriterx

Hi, I really love your poem it was so interesting. Every last stanza i like the way it says : ""Don't be afraid, just trust me my dear.""Just follow me ...

Hello there, I like your poem it is really nice and neat. I like the way it rhymes and organize into stanzas. But what does this mean: ""Thou Hast Fallen ...

Wow I love your story it is neat and nice. I also like the way you put emotions and feelings inside and it makes a great flow. But i don't ...

I like your prologue and it was very interesting. One thing is add emotions and feelings to the story like how she feels. And what do you mean:"Remembering that horrifying ...

I like your poem, it is nice and neat. I want you to put emotions and feeling how you felt. So the reader can understand it. Your rhyming it is ...

Hi, I am xv0nillaWriterx,you can call me vanilla! ; > I am here to review your poem. First things first, i love your poem and it is so romantic and ...

Hi this ix xxv0nillaWriterxx and i am here to review. I love your poem it is nice. I want you to add rhyming words and stanzas. And also you gotta ...

Hi, I love your poem and it is emotional to me. I want you add feelings and emotion to the character more. Also I want you to add and describe ...

Hello, I am xxv0nillaWriterxx here to review you AWESOME poem So your poem is a flow but add emotions and feelings about the character so the reader can understand it ...

I love your poem it is so nice. I want you to add emotions and feeling to the character so it will be so emotional. I also like when you ...

Wow when i was clicking this, i only see a box for me to write but no words. That is cool and your title interest me and the genre but ...

I like your list and the people who is going to graduate elementary school should know this to help them because it is good and neat. I am in middle ...

Hi, this is xxv0nillaWriterxx is here to review your prologue. : > So I love the way you describe the place : "The office, which was cluttered with lacquered furniture, ...

Hi, i like your short story, it is very emotional where a women can't live with him anymore and in the end i like the countdown. ""...4...3...2...1..." and you let ...

I love your poem and it is like a story where a women get abused by her husband. In a poem they include emotions and feelings so you should add ...