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Hey Serenya! This story seems interesting so far, hopefully my comments can help :) The beginning really caught my attention. After you had mentioned a major power outage I was ...

Hey there! I'm awful at reviewing poetry, but since I'm already here I thought I should write something x) This was really great, I enjoyed reading the whole poem and ...

Hey girl! hope I can help x) Very sad how this is about a kid who lost their mom, no one should ever have to deal with that but it ...

Hey there :) I realize I'm coming into this story on chapter 6, but I'll do my best in the review x) So from what I understand, your characters are ...

Very nice! I'm no good at reviewing poetry, so I'll stop while I'm ahead and just say that I like this piece :) For the record, I like subtle swearing ...

This. THIS IS WHY I LOVE YOU. Except you forgot the prologue: cool beans beans are cool there is nothing cooler. than a bean. Beans... the coolest of the cool ...

Hey there! I think you did a good job on this prologue. We get to meet your character a little and we can tell what kind of person she is. ...

Hey again! If I remember, I really loved the first version you had of this! I don't think I could find anything wrong ^_^ But I'd be happy to run ...

Hey Erza! I'm so glad I get to review something of yours ^_^ So, the basic concept of this poem is easy enough to grasp. The narrator ended up falling ...

Hey there! :) You've got a pretty cool idea here. The whole Haunted House thing has always interested me ^_^ I still get a little creeped out in dark rooms ...

Sheep!! :D I felt inclined to review this because of the title. What can I say? xD I think you have a great idea here and I would love to ...

Hi again :) I just love your story so much. It's such a unique environment that I am always wrapped right into the story whenever I read. The way you ...

Cool cliffhanger! I think you have excellent cliffhangers for every chapter in this story so far. This is a solid chapter, though it doesn't seem like there is really any ...

So we've uncovered that those two chicks are sisters, I hadn't seen that coming x) But what is this House of Elrah? What does it have to do with anything? ...

Hey, I definitely like how you stayed in the same location. We got to know the characters a lot better. Before it seemed like I'd just be getting into them ...