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Hm, this is a very tricky riddle! :D You've got me stumped, that's for sure. It reminds me of the riddles from The Hobbit, those are the best. Sounds like ...

Hey Danny! I liked this, your character has a pretty distinct voice. You've laid a lot out for us already, that he's 19, that he hates parties and company (or ...

Hey aqua ^_^ This is a great poem, I really like the content :) I think everyone can relate to having a different face behind the one we sometimes show ...

Hey ikiru ^_^ The title sounded interesting so I figured I'd give it a review! So far, I like this a lot! The idea of this girl being kinda dumped ...

Hey Star! I know you asked for a review on this a while ago, but I'm only just getting around to it x) You've already gotten a lot of great ...

Hey there :) "I don’t even remember much about my night, all I remember was rum, and lots of it. My crew were practically feeding it to me, spoon full ...

BAAAAAAA *cough cough* Ok, so this is a pretty invigorating speech, for a cow haha. I'm not completely sure if you are being serious here or just having fun with ...

Hey there! This is a pretty intense piece. Your characters come off as very disturbed which is what I think you were going for. I feel bad for the girl. ...

Hello Ingrid! :) Here to review for you! I'm just going to start with the nitpicks first, and then I'll talk about my overall impression of the chapter. --She relaxed ...

Hey, I think this is pretty cool. Usually I don't like poems or writing that has a lot of choppy words or adjectives, but for some reason it really works ...

Hey, adale! I liked this poem. I thought it had a nice message about how beautiful nature is, and how everyone just takes it for granted. As I was reading ...

Hey! First I would say you should probably edit this so that the paragraphs aren't all smooshed together. Also, making new paragraphs for each section of dialogue is also very ...

Hey blackclaw! Welcome to YWS, I hope you are enjoying your time here so far ^_^ The first thing that came to mind while I was reading the first paragraph ...

I'll just run through this and put the corrections in, okie dokie? "Be quiet, girl." He snapped, forcing me to go in front of him as we entered the tiny ...

Hello, Fruit! I spent a while just staring at your cute avatar before I even started this review ^_^ You're doing great so far! This story has a great message ...