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Re: Let This Go
Wow i loved it! i liked the repetition, even though other people really dont like it i did becuase it showed that the narraters hole life revolves around the other ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: Why Do You Let Me Stay Here?
I really liked it, it was so intense, though i was a bit confused! lol. i really wanted to know why it was so intense, a back story, i might ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: An Unnamed Poem
I loved it, its a great descrption on life and how confusing it can be :D i cant beleave you wrote this in a few minutes! lol yea i loved ...
Sep 24, 2008 -
Re: Tightrope Walking
i loved it, it is so different from all the other poems on here, i can feel the main characters fear as she walks, it must be so terrifying! i ...
Sep 24, 2008 -
Re: When dawn arrives
I only scaned through a few of the other reviews and inda agreed with some of the stuff they said - your story was really well written, i liked it, ...
Sep 24, 2008 -
Re: I will Remember
I loved it, it was so heart wrenchingly sad and beautiful about dangerouse love (lol im getting a bit poetic here) it flowed so well, i was gripped from the ...
Sep 24, 2008 -
Re: My crazy poetry
Wow if you tried to say all of that outloud you would run out of breath and pass out! lol it was great, you must feel a lot of emotions ...
Sep 24, 2008 -
Re: What Kind Of Fool Am I?
Wow that was so romantic! painfully romantic, i loved it, you remind me of one of those poets you read in books, the ones so full of emotions and every ...
Sep 24, 2008 -
Re: Sighs
I loved it, it was so emotional! lol there was a few spelling mistakes but i spell bad all teh time (you can probably tell from this review :D ) ...
Sep 24, 2008 -
Re: Away
I liked it, i wanted to know more about what had happened to her and why she was running, i sort of know what is going on but its still ...
Sep 24, 2008 -
Re: Best Friends For Never
I liked it, its the first poem on here that i have read about your best friend hurting you, and i think you really expressed your emotions in it. One ...
Sep 24, 2008 -
Re: He's not quite ready
It was great, i really felt the love between them and their frustration lol im only fifteen so ive never really had that sort of relationship and to be honest ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: Heartbeat
I really liked it, it was so different from the normal things where "red = blood and red = hate blah blah blah" I think you described the colour red ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: Falling for Jake
Yes the flashback confused me too - which part came first? the first part with the sex or the second part with them in class? i still really liked it ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: Sun and the Moon
I really liked it! I thought you really put loads of heart into it, like you were really writing about a person knew i love poems like this, where you ...
Sep 22, 2008
