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Hey there! This had me reading till the end, which is good. My concentration didn't waver and I didn't find myself wanting to skip parts, so well done there. I ...

Hey there! I haven't reviewed in a good while, so I apologise if this review isn't very helpful. I only skimmed the other's comments, so I'm sorry if I repeat ...

Hey Kagi! I so agree with this. I work in my parent's Off licence and we sell cigarettes. It's surprising the amount some people get through. I mean, one man ...

Hey there Kitty! So I'm guessing, and forgive me if I'm wrong, that the theme of your piece is supposed to be something along the lines of generosity. Not where ...

Hey there, Twit! I liked this. It's hard to write something that manages to tell a story and catch the reader's attention when you only have a small word limit, ...

Hey there Confetti! I think this piece is brilliant. I'm not sure what the prompt you were given was, but this piece is great all the same. For the first ...

Smurf! You do know that you writing something like this doesn't surprise me at all. I mean, it's full of death and sadness and anger and insanity and depressing thoughts. ...

Hey there! I liked this piece. It was a challenge to write something from the point of view of a lion who doesn't eat meat. You gave him human traits, ...

Hey there! I noticed that you reviewed some of the earlier chapters of my novel, so I thought I'd return the favour. This isn't a bad start to a novel, ...

Hey Oddkid! You know I love this story, right? It's brilliant and mesmerising and I seriously can't stop wishing that chapter had been longer. But I agree with the others ...

Hey there! You have an interesting start to a novel here. Your main character is saving herself for real love, for a her perfect guy. It's a nice thought but, ...

Hey there! I think this is a good twist on the original. You seemed to hit your idea for a theme on the head too. Now, I'm no good at ...

Hey classy :) I really liked this. It was easy to read and well put together. I was able to picture the scenes well and it helped to make the ...

Smurf! skin as I tired my hardest not to 'tried' Dang, yeah! He's expressing relief and joy here, right? But I always associate 'dang' with being negative, so it doesn't ...

Hey there thatoddkid! I enjoyed this part just as much as the first. You write with such ease that it makes me jealous to think that you're only 15 whereas ...