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Re: Imortalised
This was great. I could literally feel the sense of betrayal Emily felt. I felt as if I was there, the setting was described so vividly. I really want to ...
Nov 25, 2012 -
Re: Our Rose Has Wilted
This was very emotional for me. I really liked it and hope you write more. The pictures and people described were very vivid and easy to picture in my mind. ...
Nov 25, 2012 -
Re: Thankful For Daddy
I cried, and I can see why you shared this. That little girl is so caring, and sweet. I want to find her and give her a hug. I can't ...
Nov 25, 2012 -
Re: Mazes, Dreams, and Strawberry Fields
Well it was good and I liked it. But "prouting" is that supposed to be sprouting? Pretty good other than that though. It was really beautiful, and I really connected ...
Nov 25, 2012 -
Re: Following Stars
I really liked this poem, it seemed to have a depth to it that just really drew me in. I didn't find any mistakes, so good job. A lot of ...
Nov 25, 2012 -
Re: Increment
Well i liked it, but I'm not entirely sure I got it. It's in quotation marks so is someone speaking this? You should add more to it, it has a ...
Nov 6, 2012 -
Re: Reason for
Well I liked it. It was deep, meaningful. You probably could have arranged things a little differently so that it flowed better. Otherwise it was really good. I enjoyed how ...
Nov 6, 2012 -
Re: Insomnia
Nice font. Nice poetry. I like the way it flowed and in poetry the rythm is very important to me. I didn't find any mistakes so good job on that ...
Nov 5, 2012 -
Re: Wavelength Heartbeats
I truly enjoyed it. I can say from experiance that you captured this feeliing perfectly. Symbolism was nicely used, and the flow of the wrods was perfect. Just one thing ...
Nov 5, 2012 -
Re: The Eyes
Very nice, symbolic. You spelled penetrate wrong, but other than that nice overall. I think your words and the lines could flow a little more smoothly. It should feel like ...
Nov 5, 2012 -
Re: the boy with a bear
Well, I'll be was really really good. Well written and meaningfull. I can tell you have a lot of passion for your writing, and I'm sure others can too. I ...
Nov 5, 2012 -
Re: To My Future Daughter
Wow! Thank you so much for writing this poem. It is beautiful, and meaningful. It can have so many interpretations, but the one I got was just amazing. It was ...
Nov 5, 2012 -
Re: Hidden in the Closet
This poem was simply written and beautiful. You didn't need fancy rhymes or anything like that too make it good. 5 stars.
Nov 5, 2012