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I like this! You get the content across very well. I'd agree with dawnpath1 that if you changed some the places that you brake the lines it would make it even better! Just remember where you break the line gives extra stress to the word ending the line or starting the next.
I particularly like this stanza :
'Never thought I would
Have
Hold
Want
Need'
because of where you break the lines, they give each word particular importance.
Nice one! x

Well I liked it. It was deep, meaningful. You probably could have arranged things a little differently so that it flowed better. Otherwise it was really good. I enjoyed how it was written with mostly descriptions in the beginning, and then bringing in someone. Someone who obviously has meaning to you, or someone you hope you'll find someday. But what do I know?

Huh, this is pretty good. I can't really tell you to use meter, because in truth, for this poem meter isn't all that important. What I will tell you is that it's a tad bit weak. Not to undermine you or anything, but I think that if you broke you lines a bit differently and added a few words, it would be just that much better. However, I'm just some random faceless internet person who doesn't know you at all, and couldn't possibly understand how your feeling. In poem, do as you wish, right? I certainly wouldn't want a snob to tell me how to write MY poems. Maybe there's something I'm just not getting.