writingaway

Yes it was meant to say STAY IN SCHOOL. lol... and I wasn't trying to make this a complex or interesting poem it was more becuase i was bored

Thank you for that review, I'll try and work more on my punctuation etc. You did get the point I was trying to make so well done :)

I really liked this poem also. You brought it to a whole new level with your willingness to go in more depth with the emotions. The adjectives and descriptions of ...

I do like these lyrics.. It has the same rhythm throughout the whole song and also flow, which some 'famous' songs kind of lack. I like how you used kind ...

woops, ignore the extra poem in the middle which is red.. i may have accidently pasted it twice :S

I definetely like the flow of this poem and i enjoyed reading it from start to end. Keep it up! ,writingaway

Wow, I really like this poem. The rhymes flowed aswell as the whole entire thing. The rhymes didn't seem forced at all which is hard for people to do, including ...

overall i did like this poem, i really liked the second stanza too! You brought the point across, in my opinion. I actually do like this poem, keep it up! ...

i really like that poem, that's really all i can say. KEEP IT UP!! ,writingaway

Thankyou for your feedback, however when I write a poem i don't notice or care in this matter if i make a grammer error and such. I don't like to ...

thanks for the feedback, i don't write a poem then punctuate or capitalise it. I just submit it the way i write it. Thanks anyway

Your poem is quite good although needs some work in the following areas; -You should find the meaning of words before you use them. -The pace of this poem isn't ...

i know where your coming from when you say you will act fine infront of people but just want to escape.. in a way everyone is like that, some of ...

i do like your poem. although im not quite a fan of some of the sentences which end in just a word. but that is just me

you have a very good character, and really like this poem