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This is my first completed poem. I hope there are not too many errors. Please critique! Thanks!!!! Hero She sits back in her chair, Remembering the old days. The days ...

I just finished reading The House of The Scorpion by Nancy Farmer. I thought it was a fantastic book. Nancy addresses the issue on clones and I loved how she ...

Alright...This is going to be a chapter out of a book I am writing. Not quite sure where it is going to go, but...If you any comments, please post them. ...

So, this is a story I got inspired to write last night. I was remebering a poem I wrote not too long ago and thought that it would be better ...

I fixed this chappie. Tell me what ya think! Chapter 1 revised “Hey Sandi, hand me another,” I slurred, as I reached my hand out to her. She thrust another ...

Woohoo! Chapter 2 is up!!! Critique please! Chapter 2Safe I cautiously walked up to my front door, peeking in the window to make sure my father was asleep. The house ...

The third chapter! Chapter 3Attack The brisk wind blew against me, sending shivers throughout my body. I pulled my coat around me tighter. I walked down the dark street, wishing ...

Chapter 4Redeemer Something smacked against the creature on top of me. Her teeth jerked out of my skin as she flew backwards. Snarling erupted in the distance. A fire was ...

Chapter 5Adapting I hadn’t realized a burning, scratching sensation in the back of my throat until Carlisle noticed me swallowing constantly. He said it was hunger. “Is that what it ...

I don't think I'll put up the whole story on here. I just want to know what you all think of the prologue. Doesn't really explain much. And I don't ...

Chapter 7 Introductions I listened as the woman’s heartbeat slowly died away. Silent thumps were all that could be heard. Carlisle was truly disgusted with himself. A terrible sadness had ...

Thank you so much Night Mistress for informing me about not posting chapter 6. Here it is and I know it is totally written in a different way than Ch. ...

Thank you all for the helpful reviews! I hope you like this next chapter of Welcoming Freedom! =] Chapter 8 Packing “Carlisle?” I called. The giant packing box was getting ...

A poem I wrote when I was feeling down. I am not thinking about suicide or anything. Just felt the need to be depressed... I bite my fingernails. I chew ...

Here is the 9th chapter to my fan fiction, Welcoming Freedom. Hope you all like! =]Becca Chapter 9 A New Beginning The sky had darkened considerably since the sun glowed ...

Thank you for the reviews! I hope you like this chapter! Chapter 10Moving In Carlisle took the golden key out of his pocket and placed it in the lock. With ...

Alright. So this is my third try at writing a poem. If I keep practicing, maybe I'll get a good one someday. Please critique this! I really need your help! ...

A random poem I was inspired to write while eating pancakes. =] Yum, yum! Pancakes are yummy. Pancakes are good. Would you like to try some? I think that you ...

This is my first ever song that I have tried to write. Your help would be greatly appreciated. And I hope you like it, too! Why Can't You See? Verse ...

This is the longest chapter I have written so far in this fan fiction. That is a breakthrough for me. Thank you so much for critiquing and your wonderful comments. ...

This is my second attempt at writing a song. Any help would be greatly appreciated. Just Believe I was a new girl to this town not too long ago I ...

I’m really not that bad… Am I? Am I so horrible that I should just die? Are all teenagers like this? Or is it just me? Why am I not ...

Ah, Valentines Day. The day where love is in the air and everyone is full of happiness. Yeah, wish I was feeling like that. I have been alone on this ...

There’s a heart-shaped box sittin on my window sill It has a lot of space inside for you and me to fill With love notes and treasures Expressions of love ...

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