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wretchednot

  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: love does too

    Good one right here

    Jun 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Cracking Mirror

    Wow...talk about new revelation.

    Apr 1, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: -

    Hello there. First I must say I likednthis and reading this was very interesting and a bit funny. I laughed a bit when I read the end and realized the ...

    Mar 22, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: ...

    Veey good essay I can visualize a very heated discussion about this.

    Mar 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: One single human emotion

    Good story.

    Mar 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Theatre Re: Unfinished Songs

    Hello there. First I'd like to say I am a bit disappointed. The lyrics are pretty good and it's a shame you didn't finish them because you couldn't put them ...

    Mar 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: No More Death

    Well,well. I see you captured a sense of death and dying and such. So you did a rather good job. I like how you kept it short and simple. And ...

    Mar 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: All You See is Lines.

    I must say you did a good job in portraying a very serious and empathetic mood and I commend you on that. I always wondered what it feels like to ...

    Feb 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Listening to a heartbeart

    Hello there.I just wanted to say I very much enjoyed reading this poem.I loved how you used all the right words in all the right places. And I loved the ...

    Jan 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: A rape story.

    Okay review time. I just want to say your story was very structured and such. Also very realistic just by reading I could already picture what that woman was going ...

    Jan 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Those Three Words.

    Absolutely devine, lovely,and sad. You really depicted love and judgment beautifully. This is rather amazing and relatable and suspenseful. It speaks volume about the heart and decisions. Choosing and

    Jan 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Three Weeks left (Chapter 2)

    Hello there I'm here for a review. First off I like this story it really displays a sad tone and mood. Poor girl about to kill herself. However I feel ...

    Jan 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Value Chapter 1

    Hello just wanted to say good work! I love the plot and all so far very good. But make sure to check your work first like when you put eye ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: How Society Views Me

    Love the story! I like how you put on a tone of defiance in this which I find intriguing. To me it's saying "I am myself and can only be ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: The Danger of Boredom

    Hello there just wanted to say this was interesting to read and I enjoy it because I feel I can relate to this. I cannot begin tell you how boring ...

    Jan 10, 2014


Everything in the universe has a rhythm, everything dances.
— Maya Angelou