wordsandwishes

Wow I really loved this poem. It almost made me cry. Your emotion and voice was amazing. It flowed perfectly with the layout you chose. Even your spelling and punctuation ...

I only have one suggestion (Since everyone else covered pretty much everything); I would've spaced it, like this: Trying so hard to rise above , Trying to please my wonderful ...

Wow, that was amazing. I love your layout, it was a very good rhyming scheme. Your conventions were good too. And your word choice was also very well incorporated. What ...

I really liked this poem. The title fits it perfectly. Your layout, emotion and descriptiveness were used effectively. (Not too much or too little, flowed nice, etc.) Your conventions were ...

I really enjoyed this poem. Your layout was amazingly dynamic. I like how the words on the side say something; Will She Love Who I Am (?) Yes (,) No(.) ...

I love the descriptiveness and emotion of this piece. It's very unique. I find it interesting (in a good way) that you often refer to the metaphorical term "Bleeding secrets". ...

I really enjoyed this piece. Your flow and word choice portrays your message rather well. And I didn't notice any spelling/grammar mistakes either. However, I would've done the format differently ...

GOOD STUFF; Wow, that was very deep and emotional, a very good piece. I also liked the simplicity of your title; it conveys your message perfectly. BAD STUFF: I noticed ...

I loved how you incorporated such great emotion. It sucked me in, it's one of those poems you wish would never end. Your conventions and flow were flawless as well. ...

I really liked how your poem focused on something real and made people think. It was really deep. Your metaphors and good description are amazing. I loved it. Your conventions ...

I loved your description and intense emotion in this piece. It really gives the reader a clear image in their mind. Your spelling was good too, but I noticed a ...

I like the way you labeled stuff so that people know what's going on. Your spelling and punctuation -yada yada yada- was good. Your message was clear. And overall the ...

I loved your metaphorical imagery. Your flow was very good as well, unique too. And I didn't notice any spelling or punctuation mistakes either. I really liked it. My favorite ...

I like the way you portrayed your message in a casual (but not too casual ) way. Your rhyming scene and flow was flawless. Your conventions were well executed. Over ...

That's a very insightful way of looking at things. I like the simplicity of this piece. Your convents were good, it had very nice flow, and the title was very ...