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Re: Measuring Success
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. Your imagery has to be the best of all the poetry I've reviewed today, very well done indeed. And now for the checklist: Layout? Good Word choice? ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: Why Fear Is Worse Than Greed
Simple, but beautiful. I love it. Especially the way you used the word consume, I haven't seen the word used in that way much before. Though I do believe the ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: A Stream Of Consciousness
I really like this piece, it speaks to me more than you know. But as I come to review it I find myself disappointed; I can't find anything of which ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: That Other World
I really like this poem, it has a few rough edges, but they're only minor mistakes (ones that I find I make a lot myself X3). The only thing I ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: I'm not a pessimist, I'm a grown-up
I like this, it reminds me of a TED talk or something... I usually review poetry, so I'm used to the whole 'up for interpretation' kind of writing. I actually ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Sometimes in Life
Hey there, wordsandwishes here to review.^^ I have to say I really love the meaning of this peace, the way you show giving in as a form of freedom. It's ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: The Gardener
I have to say, this is one of my favourite types of poems; It's filled with layers of meanings hidden under other meanings and I find it just, well, beautiful. ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: I Never Knew
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I love the rawness and the artistic simplicity of it. It's short, so it doesn't dilute the message or the emotions behind it at all; well done. ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: {untitled for now}
Wow, this is probably one of the most breathtakingly unique poems I have ever read! It has this sort of...what's the word for it... abstract beauty that I love, and ...
Mar 13, 2013 -
Re: Fake Eyelashes
I love this! *fangirl moment!********************************************* *ahem*. Wow. Okay, I find this poem has a lot of really unique undertones, and things not quite said. So I'm going to review
Feb 26, 2013 -
Re: The Seraphim and the Prince
This is very unique, and it portrays such a hauntingly beautiful story... Well, long story short, I loved it! Your words and imagery were beautiful, and your flow had a ...
Feb 26, 2013 -
Re: War Against Others and Myself- Prologue
I have to say that I really like this! I've never seen a vampire story placed in such an old time period, and the way everything unfolded so naturally and ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Forever and Always Part 2
Hey there Raelyn! First off, I have to say that I really enjoyed this piece, so far. I haven't read part three yet. And I didn't notice even one spelling ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Tea has fixed me
First off, I thought I should congradulate you on writing one of those poems that you have to re-read to fully wrap your head around. *re-reads 3 times* Okay, here's ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: From Those Who Exist in Doric Order Architecture
First off, I'd like to say that I found this poem very deep. So I'm going to have to review it stanza or I'm sure to miss something. Okay, here ...
Feb 24, 2013
