Hey Andge!
Fellow Green Beret! Your friendly co-captain sliding in with a review for you mere minutes before Review Day ends.
Okay! Wow. I liked this. Brief, concise, to the point. Very nice.
I like how, even though there wasn't a clear rhyme scheme, you made this flow nicely. Your pace was wonderful. Your topic even better. I can honestly say I adored this poem!
Keep writing!
~Shady
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