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wordsandwishes

  • Poetry » Other, Fantasy Re: Measuring Success

    Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. Your imagery has to be the best of all the poetry I've reviewed today, very well done indeed. And now for the checklist: Layout? Good Word choice? ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Other » General, Other Re: Why Fear Is Worse Than Greed

    Simple, but beautiful. I love it. Especially the way you used the word consume, I haven't seen the word used in that way much before. Though I do believe the ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: A Stream Of Consciousness

    I really like this piece, it speaks to me more than you know. But as I come to review it I find myself disappointed; I can't find anything of which ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: That Other World

    I really like this poem, it has a few rough edges, but they're only minor mistakes (ones that I find I make a lot myself X3). The only thing I ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Other » Realistic, Literature Re: I'm not a pessimist, I'm a grown-up

    I like this, it reminds me of a TED talk or something... I usually review poetry, so I'm used to the whole 'up for interpretation' kind of writing. I actually ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sometimes in Life

    Hey there, wordsandwishes here to review.^^ I have to say I really love the meaning of this peace, the way you show giving in as a form of freedom. It's ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: The Gardener

    I have to say, this is one of my favourite types of poems; It's filled with layers of meanings hidden under other meanings and I find it just, well, beautiful. ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I Never Knew

    Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I love the rawness and the artistic simplicity of it. It's short, so it doesn't dilute the message or the emotions behind it at all; well done. ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: {untitled for now}

    Wow, this is probably one of the most breathtakingly unique poems I have ever read! It has this sort of...what's the word for it... abstract beauty that I love, and ...

    Mar 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Fake Eyelashes

    I love this! *fangirl moment!********************************************* *ahem*. Wow. Okay, I find this poem has a lot of really unique undertones, and things not quite said. So I'm going to review

    Feb 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Supernatural Re: The Seraphim and the Prince

    This is very unique, and it portrays such a hauntingly beautiful story... Well, long story short, I loved it! Your words and imagery were beautiful, and your flow had a ...

    Feb 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: War Against Others and Myself- Prologue

    I have to say that I really like this! I've never seen a vampire story placed in such an old time period, and the way everything unfolded so naturally and ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Forever and Always Part 2

    Hey there Raelyn! First off, I have to say that I really enjoyed this piece, so far. I haven't read part three yet. And I didn't notice even one spelling ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Tea has fixed me

    First off, I thought I should congradulate you on writing one of those poems that you have to re-read to fully wrap your head around. *re-reads 3 times* Okay, here's ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: From Those Who Exist in Doric Order Architecture

    First off, I'd like to say that I found this poem very deep. So I'm going to have to review it stanza or I'm sure to miss something. Okay, here ...

    Feb 24, 2013


I always like to look on the optimistic side of life, but I am realistic enough to know that life is a complex matter.
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