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Re: The Attachment
Hi there! i liked how personal this was. really enjoyed how you made it almost like a conversation, it was like it was breaking the fourth wall. you made it ...
Jul 18, 2014 -
Re: Who is he?
Hello! Welcome! very cute story. slightly short but thats why they call it a short story. i like how you were able to capture the personality of a cat and ...
Jul 18, 2014 -
Re: Fever Dream
Wow! Just gorgeous! Loved the use of all the different and uncommon descriptive words! Really painted a picture! I liked how it was really one specific thing, but everything! Really ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: The Last Episode
Hi there! Very funny story! Super relatable! I love how you could tell the time lapse without ever actually referring to the time. I liked how every time the situation ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: I Want a Heart
Hi! Okay, wow, first of all, very twist ending, was not expecting that at all and I love unexpected surprises. You captured the emotion very well. I like that you ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: Before Never Land
Hi!! To start off, very good story, you really captured the essence of Neverland and you gave us a reason of how everything was created. I liked your use of ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: what goes in her head
Hi there! For starters, I liked how you captured her personality with her thoughts and made it very relatable. I imagine scenarios like this to so it was nice to ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: Mother- A short
Hello! Very good job! i liked the overall message and how you made it kind of like a mother and son. you really capture so much emotion in such few ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: listening to the moon
Howdy! really liked the symbolism of the moon and how you portrayed these deep, meaningful thoughts. it felt majestic and magical. i like how you kind of hint at the ...
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: The Rose
Howdy! this was a very emotion filled story, i loved it. you really captured every emotion from every angle. i liked how well you symbolized the rose and used it ...
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: Cookies Anonymous
Howdy partner! overall good job! i liked all the puns and humor, very smart and clever. i like that it was something so simple and just based off of someones ...
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: I Love This Website!!!
Howdy! very good job. i like how the words seem to flow so evenly and fell into a perfect rhythm. i really feel you captured the feelings of everyone on ...
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: She had asthma
Howdy! i enjoyed this very much. i love the imagery and emotion. i love how no characters are named yet you can still feel them there and feel that relationship ...
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: Creations
Hello! very good job! felt very unique and different from other poems ive ever read. i enjoyed how you made it feel so shakespeare like. it had an essence of ...
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: Memories
Hello! very good job. I like how you portrayed twilights emotions especially after all that has happened in the series to her. i could really sense the character development and ...
Jun 20, 2014
