wickedlygoodwriter

wow, this was a very nice story with a wonderful moral. it has a very nice narrative style and flows nicely. i love how personal the story feels. it's a ...

WOW! that was amazing! where to begin?! i loved the gorgeous words and descriptions! made me feel like i was seeing what hes seeing, smelling the dust of the library ...

Howdy! Wickedlygoodwriter here for a review! i agree with SoundsOfSilence, you had a really good idea but it needs a little bit of polishing up. i would check your spelling ...

Hello! Whoa! this was a very entertaining story to read! i loved how flawlessly it flows and works. you write in this style very well. i was able to get ...

Hello! wow! that was amazing! i loved the emotion in it and how you were able to bring the story back around at the end and tie it up. at ...

hello! wow that was amazing! the descriptions were on point and just the right amount. it had a nice historical kinda steampunk feel to it. you really tied up all ...

Hi Satira! overall i really liked it! although. it doesn't really seem like a short story it does seem like the first chapter of a story and i think maybe ...

Wow! really good! i really could feel the drama! i loved that constant pattern and the emotion with each one. you left no strings unattached. you wrapped up the story ...

Hello There! overall, well done! i loved the vivid imagery! it really painted a picture you segwayed very nicely from the backstory into the present and the characters felt very ...

Hello! i really liked this story and how it defied a lot of common stereotypes and archetypes in writing. you didnt make the kid naive and innocent you gave him ...

Good morrow! very good and different story! i never thought i would find a story like this on YWS but im glad i did. it was nice, short and to ...

Hi! very weird, cool story! really reminded me of Alice in Wonderland when she says, is a raven like a writing desk? i like that none of the question seem ...

Howdy! very weird, captivating story. i liked that even though it was in third person, you still really captured graces innocence and child like attitude. it was a little confusing ...

Wow! very good descriptions! i really loved how you made it so child like and innocent and i really felt captivated at such an imaginative piece. despite not having any ...

Review! i liked that it wasnt a traditional poem and it had a deeper meaning to it. i like that you gave it feeling, though by looking at your title ...