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Re: Since Its Been A While(Flies In The Dark Poem)
This poem. is STUNNING. I absolutely love the dreamy Alice-In-Wonderland-like mood, and the imagery in this incredible. “A dress that bellows/A well dressed fellow/And a closed door.” This creatio
Mar 25, 2021 -
Re: SHE
This poem is LOVELY!!! I absolutely love how you used the final idea of each line to start the next one. This is a very tough method of poetry, and ...
Mar 25, 2021 -
Re: Stormy Skies
This story was.. really beautiful. I loved it. Hi!!! Wayward here for a short review! This story was done gorgeously. I love the way you develop the story as it ...
Mar 25, 2021 -
Re: Here Comes the Sun
This story was SO GOOD!!! I normally don’t read shorts on this website but I LOVED this!! It was incredibly well put together, and I learned a lot about the ...
Mar 25, 2021 -
Re: birdpaths
This poem... is so beautiful. I'm genuinely in awe. Hi!! Wayward here for a quick review !! The formatting of this poem is absolutely stunning. I love what you've done ...
Mar 25, 2021 -
Re: fear of heights
OH. wow. this poem is. absolutely stunning. I am here!! for a lil review :) The first stanza is PERFECTLY put together. It gives the same feeling as falling, really. ...
Mar 24, 2021 -
Re: onion layers
This poem. Is so beautiful. I can't even select lines that I adored, which is what I normally do, because every single line works together with the others to create ...
Mar 24, 2021 -
Re: On Zyzzyx Road
This poem is LOVELY and confusing in the most beautiful way. I absolutely adore it. I'm gonna give a short review! (Or long review. Idk mate.) "'So they taste like ...
Mar 24, 2021 -
Re: No topic
This poem?? is stunning?? I absolutely adore it. It's written in a mixture of a poetic and personal style that really brings out the personal nature of it. It's beautiful ...
Mar 23, 2021 -
Re: Perfectionist Put to Heel
I really like this! It puts the struggle of the need for perfectionism very well. I don't have many tips for structure, but there are a couple that could be ...
Mar 11, 2021 -
Re: Secrets of the Wood
This is absolutely beautiful. The title is perfect, and the whole poem is enchanting. I love the rhymes that you've scattered throughout the poem- not in stanzas or with a ...
Mar 11, 2021 -
Re: The Revolutionary
AAA madam this poem is one of my very favourites of yours, so Imma review it!!! (I probably won't have any criticisms though, so it may just be me yelling ...
Mar 11, 2021 -
Re: Hermes
I. Love this. So much. This is really beautiful, and the abstract language helps immensely to contribute to the themes of confusion and overwhelming... ness. You've done an incredible job, ...
Mar 11, 2021
