This poem is LOVELY!!! I absolutely love how you used the final idea of each line to start the next one. This is a very tough method of poetry, and it’s difficult to achieve a single story through it, but you’ve managed it perfectly!! It’s creative, it’s inventive, and it’s absolutely beautiful. This is the kind of poem you have to read a few times to note down every word and turn of phrase. The connections of so many different ideas would ordinarily be chaotic in a bad way, but this is chaotic in a very good one!! Instead of splitting into many pieces, it tells pieces of the same story through its connections.
Overall, incredible!! A very good poem.
Points: 390
Reviews: 103
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