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Re: A day in the life of an ordinary chick
woah, this is so unique!! I was expecting something written but I'm so glad I came across this. this is the first time that I've seen artwork here. your drawing ...
Feb 12, 2023 -
Re: Resolutions
hello!! to put it simply: this poem is beautiful. everything about it is so well put together and i adore the whole "time" theme. each line is so meaningful, and ...
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Re: My Goodbye Poem.
hello!! this is a very beautiful poem. you described growth so well, the idea of striving for a better life, then realizing that YOU have to give yourself that life, ...
Jan 29, 2023 -
Re: The Art of Deception.
hello! welcome to YWS 😃 I love this piece so much. The suspense and drama, the entire impression of it is so enthralling, it's very poetic. I love how the ...
Jan 17, 2023 -
Re: A Millennium Later - Chapter One
hello! welcome to YWS first of all, I need to applaud you for your cliffhanger. so well written 👏. I really enjoyed this first chapter because of the suspense. Writing ...
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Re: People Like Us
hello!! welcome to YWS I find this entire poem very beautiful. I love how it's a comparison of lost people and found people, and how none of them have perfect ...
Jan 16, 2023 -
Re: The Sky of Imagination washed away
hi! you did such a good job of portraying the whole theme (which is growing up, I believe) throughout the entire poem. and I LOVEE angsty poetry and just in ...
Jan 15, 2023 -
Re: the poems i write at unholy hours of night
hello!! okay firstly the title, it's so captivating and eye-catching. It resonates with the poems since you can have so many strange thoughts and random poem ideas (mostly) at night. ...
Jan 15, 2023 -
Re: to you, my love from far away
hello! okay, first of all, I love the whole aesthetic setup for this. your mood board really matches up with it, and I love the vocabulary you use throughout the ...
Jan 12, 2023 -
Re: The Dark Truth E.1
hi, welcome to YWS! I really enjoyed reading your piece, it has so much potential. I don't usually read horror stories, but this, I found quite intriguing. (note: everyone has ...
Jan 4, 2023 -
Re: the yellow alarm clock
Hi! This was a great read, short and sweet. I love how you wrote the dialogue, " "Okay." I hug him back. "Understandable, I guess. 'Cause you're my bestie. But ...
Jan 3, 2023 -
Re: I Will Love You for the Rest of My Life [bonus]
I really enjoyed this poem. You did an amazing job with the rhythm and flow of the poem, it's so nice to read and I love the rhyme, the words ...
Jan 3, 2023 -
Re: The story of Lisa, the burning fire girl
Hi, this was a great read and I really enjoyed it. I love how you split up parts into small chapters, but throughout chapters 11 to 14, I feel you ...
Jan 3, 2023
