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I am reporting you for being insulting to me I am new so sorry I didn't do it like everyone else I am trying to review to get points to ...
Oct 7, 2015 -
Re: A Clock
I think this is great. I think that this is very true. Alot of people when I talk get ticked. So you described life perfectly. And thats what I like ...
Oct 6, 2015 -
Re: ~
Oops sorry computer gliched i did not mean to do that please do not tell on me
Oct 6, 2015 -
Re: ~
I think this is kind of mean. I think it is also harsh at the end. I think you should not say shut up. Instead you can put so be ...
Oct 6, 2015 -
Re: ~
I think this is kind of mean. I think it is also harsh at the end. I think you should not say shut up. Instead you can put so be ...
Oct 6, 2015 -
Re: Someday Fly
:) :):) :):) :):) :):) :):) :):) :):) :):) :):) :):) :):) :):) :)
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Something I Realized
No it is not the world is a wonderful place :O
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: When The Bell Tolls
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Apr 26, 2015
I think this was alright. I think the poem can flow better if you added a rhyme scheme. You were very abstract and creative while writing this. There are some ... -
Re: 1000 Cries
I love this poem. I think people can learn from this. I also like that it has a rhyme scheme. I also thick that the repetition is a good thing. ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Death
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Apr 21, 2015
I think this is too depressing. You need to make it not so sad and cruel. Also there are some thing you can fix and make better. First the picture ... -
Re: Chapter 1(Empty Vessel)
This is a pretty good story. First in paragraph 4 the knocks should be spaced so people can read it clearly. In paragraph 5 sentence 2 change I and Anna. ...
Feb 26, 2015 -
Re: Life
ok i will take that out
Feb 25, 2015 -
Re: Life
i wrote this when i was upset but my life is like that too. i live in a house of girls and my sister or chrissy321 wrote the positive life ...
Feb 25, 2015 -
Re: Life
ok i will review and look at our stories
Feb 25, 2015 -
Re: Life (Positive)
bruh you copied me no fair don't be copying the things i write
Feb 25, 2015
