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  • Other » Teen Fiction, Fanfiction Re: Flower Pot Scene

    WOW! Is there more?? It's so GOOD! I promised I will check out your work; It's me, CATS!!! Let's talk about my favorite parts :) The Beginning: Stunning, driving readers ...

    Aug 28, 2025
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The car didn't stop (a true story)

    Aww, so emotional! I love it! It's like memories were flooding through me, even though I never experienced it! It's a real story? Is it about you and your friend? ...

    Aug 27, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: do you like me?

    Lucky for you that you got your crush as a boyfriend!!! I love how each sentence starts the same but ends with a different interesting line! So nice! I have ...

    Aug 27, 2025
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: THE SYSTEM

    Honestly, this is the most interesting story I've ever read on YWS! I don't know how you do it; it's mesmerizing and keeps the reader hooked for such a long ...

    Aug 27, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Other Re: Nina’s torment

    A bit relatable honestly lol...it's CATS here again, to review your story. You sure write a WHOLE LOT :D Okay, let's see... The murmurs of disgust at the start is ...

    Aug 17, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Bonfire

    Just like it described, dramatic and realistic (in a great way). It's CATS here to review your great poem! Let's get right into it... The first paragraph gives it a ...

    Aug 17, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: TIME. : chapters 1-3

    HI! It's CATS here, with another review! Wow...I am really impressed! I'm really into romance and other stuff, you can see in my novels. My chapters are also quite short, ...

    Aug 16, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Come Back Soon

    Hi! I love your avatar (nothing related to poem lol)...it's CATS here, and here to review your awesome poem! Just looking at the title drew me in, thinking it is ...

    Aug 16, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: are you aware of my existence (or is it all just a dream)

    Hi teriyakisushi!!! I haven't seen you in a while! It's your friend, CATS, here reviewing your poem! Just from the title, it sounds emotional and descriptive, so I'm going to ...

    Aug 15, 2025
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Drafts

    The title caught me in. Hi, it's CATS here, and with another review! Lets start reading: The first paragraph is like talking to me, honestly, so relatable XD The second ...

    Aug 11, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Shadows - A poem

    Wow!!! New to YWS, huh? Well, you sure got some talent in poems! Your writing is descriptive and drives me into the scene right away. The title is mesmerizing and ...

    Aug 11, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Biophilia

    I love the grammer in this poem. So descriptive and in detail. It is also very creative and beautiful. It sets the scene in my mind with every sentence. My ...

    Aug 7, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Waterlilies on the Bow - Poem

    So descriptive and beautiful! It paints a setting, a scene into my mind. I love the rhyming and syllable pattern as well!!! The second last paragraph sets the scene so ...

    Aug 7, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: you never let me into chrysalis

    Is this about a butterfly? It is really descriptive and full of feeling. I love it! I'm going to break it into parts: The first paragraph is descriptive and has ...

    Aug 7, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: A diary of a tree

    That is so creative, doing a diary about a tree! The title brought me in. It seems to me that this entry is about how once ago, the tree was ...

    Aug 5, 2025


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