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Heyo Jalmoc :D I'm here to critique this piece of yours. And I'd like to apologize in advance. I haven't read the previous chapters, so if I happen to say ...

Hey there MissMystery! I'm here to annoy you to no end review your piece. :D Since I'm not really one to talk about the story itself, besides saying how much ...

Hey the Bandit :D You've got a nice piece here that I'm unfortunately going to have to point everything wrong with. So let's get started. So first off, you got ...

I'm sure you meant to write 'Trends' and 'Read' in your A/N, no? :p I know you didn't ask for grammar and spelling, but here: ... beneath/me a layer of... ...

Heyo Soul :D Veeren here to critique your lovely piece. First things first, I have mixed feelings about the flow of the whole chapter. At first it felt like it ...

Heyo Lylas :D First off, all I see is a big blob of text, and that's a big no no. Here are some basic rules for paragraphing in a novel: ...

Heyo! Here like I promised :D I apologize in advance if this seems a bit long, or if anything seems unnecessary. I just thought if it was really important to ...

Heyo FF! I'm here to completely annoy you with nitpicks review your short story! :D First off, this struck me as odd; ...the secret to life was never taking advantage ...

Heyo Mikkie :D Veeren here to critique this piece of yours. I'll start off with the grammar and spelling and such. Your second sentence: I was currently texting my best ...

Hey there Blift! Since there's not much content for me to review, I think I'll put on my Grammar Nazi cap and see if I can spot any problems. Oh, ...

Heyo Sionarama! You've got a nice work going here, but there's just a few things that really hold it back from being a great script. One, the characters feel a ...

Heyo Jefferey :D While you've got a nice piece here, I'd have to say you have a few grammatical errors. The first paragraph, for example, would look much better like ...

Hey there boyan! If nothing else, you are VERY descriptive with your work. You're able to paint a picture in my head with ease, and I'm easily able to follow ...

Hey there shloka! This is one of the best poems I've read in a while! Not because of what it was about really, more because it actually left me thinking. ...

Hey there! I'm more here to tell you how much I liked rather than review it. Besides the misspelling of apologizing in the first line, I think your grammar and ...