vampyIrishgirl

I like it, I really do! I am a wiccan too, and I totally understand what your going through. (ok maybe not exactly but close) and I also get the ...

I like the poem, I do and I am not saying its terrible it is just that I think you could work it some and replace things here and there ...

I I sort of liked it... though I do think if you worked on it again then it could be so much better than it is now. there is not ...

I like this, specially because it kinda seems to me that it's about bullying... and I understand what you are saying (but if i'm totally off forgive me xD) but ...

HOWDY!!!! lol:3 ok, first off this is the best thing ever written in my opinion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! because i mean its basically (at least from what i understand) about how ssome boy ...

Howdy!!!! ok, first of this is so freaking awesome! im serious! i actually took out my guitar and started jamming out to it! i felt this was a fast song ...

Howdy!!!!! ok first off oh my goodness this made me cry! im not joking it was that good and it really seemed to get how i feel and how i ...

howdy! i really liked this, i totally understand the feeling of this song. i felt the same way but just recently i got over it :D anyway!!!! i liked the ...

i love the topic, and your wording of the whole thing. especially about the country music part lol. but i really liked how you told how music can effect anyone ...

i really like this, but i think in the beginning could use some work. the beginning seems kind of rushed, "bam, in your face" i think you could work into ...

that's where i sort of run into a bump, i cant quite figure that out yet!!!! anyway, my plan was to make Ember aka Em the heir of a powerful ...

i like this! haha i wish my sister was like that. my sister has her up and downs, but yours sounds like a great person. anyway, i liked this, the ...

Hi im vampy! Ok so i read this, and right away i felt the emotion. The sadness of the words and all of their meanings. I liked how you made ...

wow. i read every one of your writings, i sigh that wishful sigh so many times because of your writings. i love them! the way you put them in a ...

i really think you could do a whole lot with this poem. i really liked it, how when i read it and think back to all of the very good ...