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This is one of the most strange beautiful pieces on here! The structure is unique and works well to increase the fluidity and significance to your words. It is such ...

Captivating! Great work! I love how you speak of light, like it is a fluid. You containing it in a cup. I could honestly feel my insides grow dimer, which ...

It remind of me of the messy divorce my family went through. That emotion between the lines is strong and heartfelt. The flow was nice, although lacked consistency. This could ...

Beautiful! I love the droplet format, although if you committed it more it would allow more of the insanely great contracting emotion. So the give you props to hitting such ...

I love how you chose the battle of defining sin. Calling it a she and describing her evil is truly beautiful! You have a clear voice when you write and ...

HAIKU! Really interesting subjet to write about, let alone do a haiku about! It really makes a great imagine. Especially how you spell "mummy", like a child would. Gave the ...

Great work! This is an incredible first poem you should be so proud of yourself! The feelings you have emoted in this poem are strong and powerful! My only suggestion ...

Such a cool concept! I love this idea! The only thing I wish more of was better transitioning, maybe by you share your bowl with the fruit. Instead that they ...

Great work! I love the line to line rhyming! I also love the structure of the poem and the simplicity in it's nature! My only wish is that I can ...

Well done! Great imagery and voice! Your twist ending was truly magical! I can not believe I am saying this to this incredible poem but more contrast! REally allow the ...

Beautifully written! Great title to emote the practise. My wish was to clarify; This dome where pageantry and faith have wed. The only reason, because I love an air of ...

Yeeeaaaa first love poems are so tough! But you got it! It is beautiful! I love the rhyme scheme in your poem and the stanza structure is prefect! My only ...

Beautiful! I love how you call it a "letter". The ideas in this work have really formed some beautiful emotion. I love how is looks like a letter and a ...

I love the imagery! It truly emotes the "longing" and "waiting" feeling. I love the length of the poem as well, it really plays well with emotion portrayed! My only ...

Well done! I love the flow and the repetition of that one stanza, it gives almost like a "stab" at the reader. Emoting the same strength of emotion every time ...