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This is so wonderful! Really warms my heart! I love love love; "the epitome of gentleness" it flows so beautifully! The line; "There isn't a trace of terrible lingering around ...

Hello! I can tell this comes from a very deep place, making it very raw. I find it hard to write poetry from that kind of space, but that is ...

I love this! Short, sweet and on point! Love the structure and the imagery! The stanza - "The people are dancing With one and another With candle light prancing Inside ...

Well done! This poem really painted some vivid pictures, as well as abstract ways of thinking of mental illness. I would maybe try and incorporate some punctuation but it wouldn't ...

Very cleverly structures. Lots of contrasting in such a short poem. Powerful and to the point! "force so merciless" I love this! Almost paradoxical! Well done :)

I love this! I think you played very well to what the wine "gives" to people. I like the way it is structured, the brokenness makes it very beautiful. My ...

Incredible flow! Very much a poem which evokes the mind to think further and expand your prospective! " The yellow ducks can not be found Your mother cry’s as she ...

WOOOOW a poem that makes the reader never want to stop reading! Congrats! I love the flow and stanza structure of your poem! My only criticism is to review some ...

Nice creative piece! I love the flow of your words and the sounds they created! I understand the theme detachment is for sure present in the poem! Although maybe you ...

I love how you used the i love you and i hate you through the whole poem. It gives people persecutive of how the narrator doesn't change her feelings through ...

This is a great piece! The structure is spot on and the length was perfect. You had soem great spots in your piece ... The lightest of things combined to ...

BEAUTIFUL! I understand why people have not reviewed this yet, it is very bizarre and very powerful. I love your use of auras, describing them in colours and emotions. Truly ...

Very well done! Such a creative and beautiful idea! It kinda reminds me of someone suffering from an anxiety or panic attack! I really the structure of your piece, I ...

Great poem! I totally got the sense of questioning an unhealthy relationship, and the complex emotions that go with it! Your stanza sizes were prefect, and i enjoyed your rhyme ...

Beautiful! Short. Sweet. Heart felt. I really liked your link with nature in the beginning, really introduced the punch well. I love how you hook the reader with short simple ...